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Name: Vikus
Nickname/Alias: The Diplomat (of Sunagakure)
Age: 21
Height: 6'1
Weight: 180 lbs
Gender: Male
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Vikus is very fair-skinned, and is not very dark nor does he tan well. You could say he's really white, pale even for the place that he lives in being Sunagakure. A land of the sun, it doesn't affect him whatsoever. His complexion is clear and clean, and it seems that he has no facial hair from a lack of growth rather than having it shaved. His hair is long and silver, reaching mid-back length without any curls. You can find that his eyes are a sincere mixture of light gray, small bits of white, and silver, to make a entrancing pearly iris. Some argue that the colours in his iris flow around the pupil, but they're probably just hallucinating.

Because of the weight that he carries, as well as being a ninja, and especially one of a high status such as ANBU Vikus has a built body. But it's not overworked and bulging, rather enough to show that he has a healthy lifestyle regardless of all the coffee and tea he drinks.

Due to being an ANBU, Vikus' has a unique outfit that he designed for himself.


His ANBU outfit consists of a variety of garments and armors, but is very simple when put together. Starting, he wears a gray fur cowl that covers his head, neck, and shoulders, with the rest of it cut off, not being a formal cowl. During the night it creates a nice looming shadow over his face to prevent those from seeing his bright silver hair and pearly eyes. The cowl has a very light, bendable steel fitted into the fabric that allows it to protect against blades. However, it's not immune, so a strong enough and sharp enough swing could get through it. The inside of the cowl is Wolf Fur, which provides an amazing constant warmth that is not too much nor too little. And somehow it has a phenomenal feature of being nice and cool when it is hot, and warm and comfortable when it is cold out.

Secondly, he wears a cope that extends down to his ankles and connects across his chest just under his neck. Like his cowl, it is a gray colour and also has the physical characteristics of the inside being made of wolf fur. As well as having the outside be fitted with a bendable steel that can protect against blade slashes. The uniqueness of the temperature that the cowl has is shared with the cope, and it's considered to be the wolf fur by this point, but who knows. It makes living in the Sand Village awfully comfortable considering the intense daily heat.

Vikus wears a chainmail cuirass that covers his chest, shoulders(under the cowl and cope), down to his waist, and his arms but not his forearms. It is riveted, and a tight weave to fit comfortably to his body, making it require a very thin blade to be penetrated or cut through. Chainmail historically being stated as 'impossible to get through', wearing it is a choice he considers wise in a world of cutting weapons. Over his cuirass he wears a light, white tee that covers the chainmail so that his foes may not see that he is wearing it.

On his legs he wears a pair of gray cloth pants that are somewhat baggy and extend to just over his ankles so that he does not step and trip over them. Over these, he wears a pair of full greaves, which protect his shin, calf, and thighs. They are formed of thin steel plates for maneuverability and slight protection from blades.

He wears powder-steel gloves, which are fire resistant and allow him to carry slightly more than he normally would. They can also absorb shock, and allow him to grab blades without harming his hand, including his own blade if it was necessary. However, they are not immune to being impaled. They would provide a somewhat more powerful punch due to having steel powder in the knuckles, the momentum and blunt force combined.

His boots are fire-resistant, water and oil slip proof, and shock-absorbent. This gives him the ability to run across a wet ship without loosing his footing, or as he often practicing, the freerunning as he travels across the rooftops of a village or running wildly around obstacles and such. These boots also protect his feet against lightning attacks, such as how Guy's shoes were unaffected by Kakashi's Raikiri.

To top it all off, his headband is worn around his neck and has black material except for the band itself, allowing it to hang loosely and comfortably but still provide identification of his village. Around his chest is a swordbelt that allows his sword, Diplomacy, to hang at his side.


Likes & Dislikes:

Likes Crimson, Silver, Teal, Rain, Stormy Skies, Coffee, Black Tea, Philosophy, Observations, Metaphors, Riddles, Proverbs, Questions, Cryptograms, Pens, Pears, Pineapple, Strawberries, Strawberry-oriented things, Mint, An intellectual conversation, young girls, the people of his village, finding a diplomatic solution, children.

Dislikes Yellow, gold, crucifixes, sunny days, clear skies, orange juice, pulp, extreme heat, temperatures above 70 degrees Fahrenheit, War, Violent Conflict

Catch Phrase:
"Draw blood in the name of peace."
"I will do what I must for my people."
"In war, everyone is wrong."
"A fact is only an opinion of the man who knows what he's talking about."
"Question everything."

Theme Song:

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Village: Suna
Village Rank: ANBU
Skill Rank: A

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Skill Specialty:
Main: Summoning
Sub: Kenjutsu
Sub: Taijutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Fire
Bijuu: Nibi's Fire

Special Characteristics:

Due to being a diplomat, he has been able to ally himself with several races and has several summoning contracts.


Flaws/Weaknesses: Blindness in the right eye due to a stroke that can eventually heal.

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Name: Diplomacy


This is a fine tempered steel longsword that belongs to Vikus. It is his personal weapon, though it holds only two special characteristics. The first being it's ability, listed below, and it's extreme durability and near impossibility to be destroyed (like the kusanagi.) The pommel is a diamond shape, while the hilt is wrapped tightly in black linen for a firm grip. The guard has a black finish for visual effect. It has a spear-point tip, and a kaki-toshi blood groove. As well as a polished steel scabbard, accompanied with a chape and drag for extra protection for the sword. He has a black leather sword belt that goes around his chest, keeping the blade held at his waist on the left hip. Along the blade of the sword, the words "Blade of Peace" are engraved.

Rank: B
Special Abilities: It has a constant effect of that costs no chakra.
Origin: A gift from his Sensei.

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Name: (Name of jutsu)
Rank: (E,D,C,B,A,S)
Type: (Ninjutsu, Weaponry, Genjutsu, Kenjutsu, Taijutsu)
Element: (Lightning, Wind, Earth, Water, Fire)
Description: (About a paragraph describing your jutsu)

E-Rank: Auto.


Body Flicker Technique
Kunai Knife Apparition (Page was deleted; summons a kunai knife.)
Giant Shuriken Apparition (Page was deleted; Fukasaku used it to summon a giant shuriken.)

Name: Body Replacement: Flock of Doves Technique
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: -
Description: Rather than using a log or other common object as substitution for their body, the user projects a very small amount of their chakra towards doves, such as how the Crow Clone technique works. When the replacement takes place, the users body will disperse into a flock of doves that fly away, and the user will have appeared somewhere as is the purpose of the Body Replacement technique.

Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Cartesian
Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Heronian
Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Temp
Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Reflex

Name: Dove Clone Technique
Rank: C
Type: Bunshinjutsu
Element: -
Description: A technique that produces a clone by projecting one's own chakra towards dozens of doves. Because it uses the birds as a medium, it requires less chakra than the normal Shadow Clone Technique, while still being able to perform techniques. The dozens of doves come together to form the body of a clone. When the chakra projected by the user is severed, the doves disperse, though the user is still able to continue to speak through it temporarily. Like other clone techniques, once the clone is dispersed, the chakra is returned to the user. Or whatever chakra is remaining if the clone has used a technique.


Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Twirltongue
Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Ares
Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Aurora
Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Daedalus
Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Min
Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Hamnet
Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Howard

Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Pearlpelt
Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Horatio
Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Zap

Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Ripred

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RP Sample:

le Comedia ha finite.

And so we finally sit ourselves down at the proverbial bench. Take off those shoes and step into mine, take off those glasses and see through my eyes. Yes, it seems that fate has finally come to me, so now I must finish my research the way I had intended. There is so much more to learn, I wish I could have been around just a tad longer. I am so close - but it seems maybe I am the truth behind it all. To be the gatherer of death, and now as the city falls, to have it come to my doorstep. Yes, I believe acceptance is the only necessary measure to take here. I have left my door unlocked - why make destiny wait? That blade coming for my fair flesh. The taste of coming death is intoxicating - I dare say that it is not from the fine mead produced by the citizens of this city. No, my tolerance has quite leveled - it would take a brewery to sweep me off of this pedestal.

I have come to my final moments, for now after all my years of collecting the end, I am finally faced with it. Perhaps it is not that I have stopped my quest to continue gathering the end, it is that the final end I must gather is my own. Yes, it's not so much that I must accept defeat, but rather I must make it meaningful in what ways I can. What are my values? Like all those people, surely I need a purpose as well. Perhaps I do not need one, but I do not necessarily want one either. No, I simply must create one to carry on my legacy. The history books may be burned - the brains of the citizens scattered among the gravel - but time cannot be erased. Even if the world does not remember me, I will still have made my mark. I am here physically for the taking, but they will not capture my essence. No, I am something quite immortal. But that makes me feel like a narcissist, and I don't love myself that much to be a self-proclaimed immortal. No, I shall finish my legacy with something that is beyond life.

These words, I find it silly. Writing on parchment because I know that a voice is but a whisper in this world of wind. With every gust and gale a story disappears, but with this crimson ink it may last forever. Copied and retold, preserved. I already hear the screaming of these people, what have they left? I have already captured so many in my journal - to know the words of a dying man. I faced death with values and meaning. My study to know what man truly considers important. So far, his family, himself, his goals, his failures, his successes. It's all a different story depending on who is dying in my arms. I gave them a chance at lasting just a while longer than they did before, and I am glad that they accepted my makeshift salvation.

Now I must face the reality. I have come to accept the many disorders that have plagued me in my lifetime, I thought that at some point they would have prevented me from enjoying the world. But no, in fact, they have made me see it ever clearer. I have seen the darkness in blinding light, and the blinding light behind a lens that shuts out the lies. I have succeeded in my temporary presence, and I know that I have at least one person that will thank me for it. To think I would pass on these genes - just one more monster in this world. But no, not a monster, a philosopher. A seer, a man who will find even more meaning than I in the death that will soon surround him. This war is such a joke, this life is such a joke. But it is not the joke that makes the comedy - it is the comedy that makes the joke. And with a comedian, you control the comedy - the comedy is a life, and the life is a story that is shaped depending on the persons actions in their life. So in truth, we are all just a joke - and I suppose I should be laughing. That seems to be a suitable expression for this very situation. I think I'll take it to heart.

Well, look at me rambling. It seems I have wasted what moments I had left in my lifetime, my presence, my fading. I wonder if there really was a gate in the sky, because I've sent one too many people to it. I wonder if they accept my research in their fantasy. I wonder if they can see the good I have brought to this world. But I highly doubt it, as my good was brought as selfish actions with selfless intentions. But it is not intentions that ultimately decide where you go in the end, no, it is the actions those intentions shaped.

We will all die a fading memory. No hero, no legend, no story, no god will surpass the test of time. For who will carry on the tale when nobody is left to tell it?

Would you look at that, the door is breaking. I suppose it is time I delivered this journal to my wife, she is waiting on the ship. This pen, and my sword - le Comedia. May it end these bad jokes one more time before it reaches a resting place. A hibernation before another proper use. Oh, and my pocketwatch. Yes, my son will take value in it I'm sure.

I was going to save it for myself, but I know that no matter how hard I try I cannot live forever. These sands will take me in their desperate hold.

il mio comedia ha finite.
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