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Zen Hyuga(The Speed Demon of Konoha)

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Zen Hyuga(The Speed Demon of Konoha)

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Name: Zen Hyuga
Nickname/Alias: Speed Demon
Age: 21
Gender: Male
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Zen stands at an even six feet and weighs about one hundred and eighty pounds. You can clearly see that he is in shape because of the athletic build he has, but his body is mainly built for speed. His hair is short and brown, and it spikes up with a few strands dropping down to his face. He always has a look of complete apathy on his face, as if he is always calm. His skin is pale, and he has golden eyes which is far from common within his clan.

When not on a mission, he is seen wearing a red sleeveless shirt(which is his favorite color), but he prefers it to fit a little loose. He can also be caught wearing a long sleeves black shirt that fit him well but is baggy around the arm area. When on missions, he always wears his all black jacket and has his familys symbol on the back of it in white. He likes to wear his all white pants that hang loose on his ankles. And then there is a pair of black combat boots that he never goes without.


Personality:

Zen's true personality is inhumane. He loves war and pain, without it, he feels incomplete. He loves no one, and he never has. Those who are closest to him are those that proved themselves loyal. The weak will die in his presence, unless he has other uses for them. He is very manipulative, using his charisma to fool people into thinking he has an ounce of humanity left in him to get what he wants.

He is used to getting what he wants. From power, to money, to women, there is no one that will say no to him without feeling his wrath. When in battle, his fighting style is ruthless. he overpowers the enemy with superior skill, and doesn't care for his own well being while doing so. He cares for his village, or at least he tells himself so. He sees it as his territory, so he protects it.

Likes & Dislikes:

Likes-War, power, women, and money

Dislikes-Weaklings, peace and losing.

Catch Phrase: Your fate has been written, but do you have the power to change the strokes of the brush?



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Clan Name: Hyuga
Kekkei Genkai: Byakugan
Clan Symbol: N/A
Clan Jutsu: N/A
Clan History: Cannon



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Village: Konoha
Village Rank: Hokage
Skill Rank: S



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Skill Specialty:
Main:NinTaijutsu
Sub:Fuinjutsu, Medical

Elemental Affinity:
Main:Lightning
Sub:Wind, Earth

Special Characteristics:

Speed Demon- Due to constant training from a young age, Zen is 30% faster than most shinobi his rank even without the use of LRA.

The Brain- Due to Zen's high intelligence, he can train his fuinjutsu techniques much faster than others(Half the word count).

Medical Wizard- Being able to see more than the average person gives Zen the ability to easily figure out the problem is someone and cure it or make it worst as he sees fit.

Flaws/Weaknesses:

Genjutsu?!- Zen's ability when it comes to genjutsu is one of the worst. He cannot cast one, and he has to use chakra two ranks above to break any genjutsu.

Ouch! Kinda...-Only dealing with causing internal harm, Zen is 30% weaker than most his rank without the use of LRA

No More?- Zen is unable to use the water element due to his rash nature.



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All E-Ranks

Clan
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Name: Hakke Kuushou - Eight Divination Signs Air Palm
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu/Wind
Description: Hakke Kuushou is a ranged Taijutsu technique utilized by Hyuuga Neji. Extending chakra from his body, Neji will thrust his palm at his target. This will send out an invisible wave of chakra that can knock his opponent back. It is unknown if this wave can also collapse his target's tenketsu points.

Hakke Rokujuuyonshou - Eight Divination Signs, Sixty-Four Palms of the Hand
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Description: Hakke Rokujuuyonshou is a Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline. Hakke Rokujuuyonshou is a special technique passed down through the main family line. When an opponent is within the clan members divination field of attack, they can quickly begin their assault. The technique allows the clan member to use the Byakugan eye to see the inner chakra coils system. Using the Jyuuken style, they can force their chakra through their hands into the tenketsu of the opponent's body through 126 strikes. First the clan member will strike 2 times, then 4, 8, 16, 32 and finally 64. This damage forceably closes 64 tenketsu, stopping the chakra flow of the opponent. This then limits their opponents ability to use jutsu.

Name: Hakkeshou Kaiten - Eight Divination Palms of the Hand, Heavenly Spin
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Description: Hakkeshou Kaiten is a Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline using the Jyuuken. Kaiten is a special technique passed down through the main family line. Kaiten takes advantage of several of the unique abilities of the Byakugan eye. Byakugan gives the clan member an almost complete 360 degree view of their surroundings. This allows the member to see all angles of attack.If an attack is near, the clan member will release a large of amount of chakra from their tenketsu. The member then begins to spin like a top, creating a whirling vortex that can nullify almost any attack.

Name: Shugo Hakke Rokujuuyonshou - Guardian Eight Divination Signs, Sixty-Four Palms of the Hand
Rank: C
Type: Taijutsu
Description: Shugo Hakke Rokujuuyonshou is a Taijutsu technique developed by Hyuuga Hinata. During the period after the Chuunin Exam, Hinata pushed herself harder than ever before. During this time she improved her chakra control and developed her own style within the Hyuuga bloodline abilities. She practiced the technique around water to hone it to perfection. Utilizing the Hakke Rokujuuyonshou style, Hinata uses her natural flexibility and her precise chakra control to create an absolute defense. Hinata will emit chakra from her palms and move her arms in sweeping pattern movements to provide a full 360 degree range of protection for her body. This chakra will be also be able to cut through most any target which dares penetrate the protective sphere. By expelling a more sharper, stronger and more flexible amount of chakra, she can increase it's effectiveness against more massive incoming objects.

Jutsu Name: Jyuuken (Gentle Fist)
Rank: C-S
Type:Taijutsu
Element:N/A
Description:
The inner coil system that transfers chakra around the body is very close and is essentially a part of all of the human body, including crucial organs. Members of the Hyuuga clan train in a special fighting style that requires the Byakugan and excellent chakra control; through the Byakugan they are able to see the opponent's inner coil system which they forcefully channel their own chakra into, causing severe damage to organs nearby. The technique earned its name because even a seemingly gentle, unimpressive hit can prove lethal.

Name: Hakke Hyakunijuuhachishou - Eight Divination Signs, One-Hundred and Twenty-Eight Palms of the Hand
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Description: Hakke Hyakunijuuhachishou is a Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline. Hakke Hyakunijuuhachishou is a variation of Hakke Rokujuuyonshou, a technique passed down through the main family line. When an opponent is within the clan members divination field of attack, they can quickly begin their assault. The technique allows the clan member to use the Byakugan eye to make nearly double the normal 126 strikes, striking 254 times against their individual foe or opponents. First the clan member will strike 2 times, then 4, 8, 16, 32, 64 and finally 128 times.

Jutsu Name:Hakke Kusho (Eight Trigrams Empty Palm)
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description:
A palm thrust, extending ones chakra done while out of arms' reach, pushes away the victim violently.

Jutsu Name: Juuho Soushiken (Gentle Step Twin Lion Fist)
Rank- B
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description:Juuho Soushiken is a Taijutsu technique utilized by Hodaka. After gathering chakra to his fists, he will skillfully spin towards his target to avoid attack and strike them. Spectral lion heads will then form around his fists.

Hakke Hasangeki - Eight Divination Signs Destructive Mountain Fist
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Description: Hakke Hasangeki is a Taijutsu technique utilized by Hyuuga Neji. Extending chakra from his body, Neji will thrust his palm into his target. This will send out a wave of chakra that will knock his opponent backwards into nearby rock to cause further damage. It is unknown if this wave can also collapse his target's tenketsu points.

Jutsu Name:Hakke Hyaku Nijuha Sho Kyuuzou (128 Palms Vortex)
Rank- B-S
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description:A Variation of Hakke Rokujuyon Nijuha Sho (64 Palms), instead of sealing your chakra, the user creates a "black hole" effect in the chakra points, reversing the flow, making the victims chakra network collapse on itself. Think of it as turning the enemy system in a out of control rasengan that is unleashed into your opponent.

Jutsu Name: Hakke Hyaku Nijuhachi Sho (Eight Trigrams One Hundred Twenty-Eight Palms)
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description:Hakke Hyaku Nijuhachi Sho is an advancement of the Hakke Rokujuyon Sho (Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms). Double the attack speed of 64 palms and 128 palm added on a little more damage.

Name:Gentle Impact-
Rank-A
Type:Taijutsu
Element: N/A
Description:A split road use of the gentle fist that can only be used by someone who has mastered the original style. This makes use of the chakra points as actual weapons instead of forming bonds between two points. (( for reference, take all examples as if the user was using his hands)) Chakra is gathered into marbel sized orbs stuck to the user's chakra points, when contact is made, the balls erupt, this is called Gentle Impact . This is advantagous in that it can cause a wider span of damage, not just to chakra paths and points, but actually crosses over slightly into closed fist style due to the fact that it causes physical damage as well. For the most part, the chakra system is disrupted beyond repair if the user wasn't holding back. This style is saved for only masters due to the fact that the Impact orbs, can detenate prematurely, before being channeled into an enemy, thus damaging the user. In retrospect, this technque could finish an enemy in one blow if placed right.

Name:Gentle Fist Art One Body Blow
Rank:N/A
Type:Taijutsu
Element:N/A
Description:Using their ability to expel chakra from every chakra point on their body, a member of the Hyūga clan can hit their opponent with a blast of chakra that will send them flying away from the user.


Raiton/Nintaijutsu- Through the use of LRA

Spoiler:

Name: Eight Divination Signs Lightning Palm
Rank: B
Type: Nintaijutsu/Lightning
Description: This is a ranged Taijutsu technique utilized by Hyuga Zen. Extending chakra from his body, Zen will thrust his palm at his target. This will send out a wave of lightning that can knock his opponent back. It is unknown if this wave can also collapse his target's tenketsu points, but if hit, the opponent will be temperarily paralyzed.

Eight Divination Signs, Sixty-Four Palms of the Lightning Hand
Rank: B
Type: NinTaijutsu/ Lightning
Description: This is a Taijutsu technique unique to Zen. When an opponent is within the users divination field of attack, they can quickly begin their assault. The technique allows the user to use the Byakugan eye to see the inner chakra coils system. Using the Jyuuken style, they can force their lightning chakra through their hands into the tenketsu of the opponent's body through 126 strikes. First the user will strike 2 times, then 4, 8, 16, 32 and finally 64. This damage not only forceably closes 64 tenketsu, stopping the chakra flow of the opponent, but it is powerful enough to destroy the victims chakra system, leaving them in need of medical help to recover. Until then they will not be able to use jutsu.

Name:Eight Divination Palms of the Hand, Heavenly Storm Spin
Rank: B
Type: NinTaijutsu/ Lightning
Description: Hakkeshou Kaiten is a Taijutsu technique unique to Zen using the Jyuuken. Kaiten takes advantage of several of the unique abilities of the Byakugan eye. Byakugan gives the user an almost complete 360 degree view of their surroundings. This allows the user to see all angles of attack. If an attack is near, the user will release a large of amount of lightning from their tenketsu. The user then begins to spin like a top, creating a whirling vortex that can nullify any attack, as well as affect multiple enemies at once. The body of the person touched by the vortex will misinterpret the Lightning nature as "electrical signals from the nerves," making its muscles contract. This causes the body to involuntarily go stiff, while at the same time receives damage.

Jutsu Name: Lightning Release:Gentle Fist
Rank: B-S
Type:NinTaijutsu
Element:Lightning
Description:
The inner coil system that transfers chakra around the body is very close and is essentially a part of all of the human body, including crucial organs.Zen is able to see the opponent's inner coil system which he forcefully channels lightning into, causing severe damage to organs nearby. The technique is very powerful, and a strike sent to the heart may kill.

Name:Eight Divination Signs, One-Hundred and Twenty-Eight Palms of the Lightning Hand
Rank: A
Type:Nin Taijutsu/Lightning
Description: This is a Taijutsu technique unique to the Hyuuga bloodline. Hakke Hyakunijuuhachishou is a variation of Hakke Rokujuuyonshou, a technique passed down through the main family line. When an opponent is within the users divination field of attack, they can quickly begin their assault. The technique allows the user to use the Byakugan eye to make nearly double the normal 126 strikes, striking 254 times against their individual foe or opponents. First the clan member will strike 2 times, then 4, 8, 16, 32, 64 and finally 128 times. This attack is deadly, and if successful, will destroy the opponents chakra system for good.

Jutsu Name:Lightning Release:Eight Trigrams Empty Palm
Rank: A
Type: NinTaijutsu
Element:Lightning
Description:
A palm thrust, extending lightning chakra done while out of arms' reach, pushes away the victim violently, stunning them in the process.

Jutsu Name: Gentle Step Twin Lightning Lion Fist
Rank- A
Type: NinTaijutsu
Element: Lightning
Description:This technique utilized by Zen. After gathering lightning chakra to his fists, he will skillfully spin towards his target to avoid attack and strike them. Lightning based lion heads will then form around his fists, shocking the opponent to the point of passing out.

Lightning Release:Eight Divination Signs Destructive Mountain Fist
Rank: A
Type: NinTaijutsu/Lightning
Description: This is a Taijutsu technique utilized by Hyuuga Zen. Extending lightning chakra from his body, Zen will thrust his palm into his target. This will send out a wave of lightning that will knock his opponent backwards into nearby rock to cause further damage. This will collapse his target's tenketsu points, as well as immobilize them.

Katon

Spoiler:
Karyuu Endan - Fire Dragon Flame Projectile
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Attack
Katon • Karyuu Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does a string of hand seals and the proceeds to blow a large jet of fire from their mouth.

Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Attack
Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.

Name: Haikekisho • Ash Pile Burning
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range:Short and Mid range 5 to 15 meters
Element: Fire
Description:
Katon • Haisekisho is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel an ash from his mouth. This large cloud begin to envelope his foe and when the user clicks his teeth, the cloud will ignite in an violent explosion.

Name: Hosenka no Jutsu translation • Phoenix Immortal Fire Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Long Range 20 to 30 metters
Element: Fire
Description:Katon • Hosenka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals and then emits a series of small fire balls. The ninja can also hurl a projectile which is covered in these same flames. To the opponent the attack appears to be only the balls of flame, they do not see the hidden threat within the flames. Meaning that even if the flames are put out, the projectiles still converge on the target. The flames can be used to cover different projectiles like shuriken or kunai

Name: Ryuka no Jutsu • Dragon Fire Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Long Range 20 to 30 meters
Element: Fire
Description:Katon • Ryuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After binding the opponent, the ninja uses a guide wire to unleash a large torrential fire burst onto the target.

Name: Goryuka no Jutsu • Great Dragon Fire Technique
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Range: Mid Range 15 to 20 meters
Element: Fire
Description:Katon • Goryuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja will expel a dragon-headed fireball at the opponent. These fireball can destroy rocks.

Name: Endan • Blaze Bullet, Fire Release • Flame Bullet
Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Range: Mid Range 15 to 20 meters
Element: Fire
Description: Katon • Endan is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. This Jutsu allows user to emit a jet of fire from his mouth.

Name of Jutsu: 1000 Snow Blossoms
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: fire
Range:: 25 meters
Description: After doing the proper hand signs, a circle of fire made of your chakra forms in middle of your hands. Than it expands into a fireball roughly 6 diameters wide before bursting into blossom size pedals falling from the sky like snow. Upon repeating the hand signs the smaller pedal size fireball shoot at your opponent(s) at speeds of 65 mph. If they hit your opponent, they'll usually leave an out line of your opponent(s) in the remaining pedals that miss before they dissolve into nothing. As you get stronger the pedals become more deadly, with better accuracy.

Name of Jutsu: Fire Cone of Death
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Range:: 15 meters
Description: The user fills the lungs with are and shoot out a 5 meter ring of fire around your opponent. The fire ring creates walls of fire that grow up to 10 feet traps heat on the in side of the area. Once the fire wall are form a cone shape and complete cut off all air flow.The heat eats up the oxygen with in the circle very quickly causing the opponent(s) to become short breathed and drained of energy. The fire sucked all of the air out of the ring and replaces it with smoke. The smoke is a deadly gas that cause you to choke, and get blurred vision.

Name: Fire Release: Intelligent Hard Work
Rank: B
Range: 15 meters
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Fire
Handsigns: Rat → Dog → Tiger
Description: Kakuzu's fire-element mask fires a small fireball that erupts into a giant fire-storm after making contact with a surface, causing widespread destruction to the area. Since the flames travel along the ground, and cover such a wide area this is a difficult technique to evade. When combined with Wind Release: Pressure Damage, this technique is amplified to the point of being able to evaporate a large amount of water in an instant.

Medical

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Name: Chakra Scalpel
Rank: A
Range: Short (5 meters)
Type: Medical
Element: N/A
Handsigns: Non Required
Description: This medical technique forms one's chakra into a small, sharp blade. This can then be used for highly accurate incisions necessary for surgeries and anatomical dissections. Unlike regular scalpels, the chakra scalpel can actually make cuts inside the body without actually creating an open wound, limiting the risks of an infection.

Name: Mystical Palm Technique
Rank: A
Range: Short (5 meters)
Type: Medical
Element: Non-Elemental
Handsigns: 5 handsigns
Description: This medical ninjutsu allows the user to speed up the body's natural healing process by sending chakra from their hands into a wound or afflicted body part. This allows the user to heal a patient without the need for medical equipment or surgery, making it highly useful on the battlefield. It can be used to treat both external and internal injuries. It is vital to match the amount of chakra used to the severity of the affliction or injury. This requires a great amount of chakra control.

Name: Poison Extraction
Rank: S
Range: Direct Contact
Type: Medical
Element: Non-Elemental
Handsigns: 10 Handsigns
Description:This medical ninjutsu allows the user to remove poison from the blood stream. By placing this hands on a open wound of the victim the user than pour steady wave of chakra through out the body and uses it to remove an initiate that is not blood. The poison is than focused to the open wound and than pulled from the body and in a black liquid. This allows the user to heal a patient without the need for medical equipment or surgery, making it highly useful on the battlefield. It can be used to treat both liquid and gas based poisons. This requires a great amount of chakra control and time depending on how strong the poison is.





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History:
Academy Student
Zen Hyuga was born into the Hyuga clan. He was a emotionless child that went to the academy of the Leaf village, some say it was due to his mother dying giving birth. He started as a excellent student. He never failed to grasp the concept of anything he was taught at a very quick rate. Despite his learning ability, he found that his social skills were not as well off. His father was also one of the best med ninjas in the family, gaining quite a bit of respect. But on the day on his graduation, his father failed to come back from a mission.

Genin
From that day on Zen was all alone. Not that he cared. He slowly began doing even better on his missions , the tragedy taking no emotional toll on him whatsoever. All he cared for was power. But this was taking a toll on his teamwork skills. He preferred handling things himself, because no matter how hard they tried, his teammates couldn't keep up.

Chuunin/Jounin
Because of this, Zen caused his team to fail the chuunin exams the first time. And of course he Hyuga pride made him blame them for his failure. He was soon sent to train under an old retired Anbu by himself. Upon training under the man, Zen learned much more than he thought was possible with his previous teacher. For once in his life, he found something that was somewhat challenging. But that didn't change the fact that he was a prodigy. Learning to stay in the shadows, and to fight like some of the best in Konoha, he calmed down a bit.

He saw his team once again during the exams, and he graduated after a long test, winning back the respect of his peers. But once he got it, he found that it did nothing for him. The praise of others was nothing next to the power he felt when in battle. So as a jounin, he trained and developed incredible speed.

Kage

Zen was always on the lookout for a challenge. Moving from ninja to ninja, he made quite a name for himself among merchants and fellow ninja alike. He was called by many names, but the one that stuck the most was the Red Sage. Soon, he felt that he was the most powerful man in the village. So he led a riot, taking on the kage and killing him. He has been the hokage since.

RP Sample:


Hope. Though he thought of himself as the farthest thing from it Riku had been given the name by the citizens of this damned city. When he looked at himself, he saw no hope, but he saw just another shinobi, trying to get by. Looking out over the balcony, Riku watched the people live from day to day, the weak being taken control of by the poor. That was just the type of village it was. If you were not strong then you better become strong or live to be someones plaything. He was not hope. If he was, he would be doing something about this rather than watching it. He sighed as he looked up in the sky. It seemed as if permanent clouds blocked the sun from them, a ray of sunshine seldom breaking though. Now that was hope. The small ray of light that showed them that they could someday see the sun. Giving them hope of a brighter future. Riku could not compare himself to that. He was not hope, but someday, he would show them hope.
Seeing a thug steal a piece of bread from a poor orphan. Disappearing he reappeared in front of the thug, hitting him with a temporary paralysis. Then looking at the little girl, he spoke. " He stole your food, what will you do to punish him?" The girl looked up at him hopeless. He took out a kunai and handed it to her. "Do what you have to do before he gets up," he said before he disappeared. Some would say that what he did was heartless, but is was what the girl needed to survive. He would make this city strong yet.


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Re: Zen Hyuga(The Speed Demon of Konoha)

Post by Blue Spirit on Thu Dec 08, 2011 8:45 pm

Done. And though I put N/A for clan KKG, Zen has the Rinnegan as i put in the appearance and the history.

Flaw-It takes two ranks higher to break a genjutsu so if a d rank was used on him for kai he would need to use a B rank amount of chakra


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Post by Kai Terumi on Thu Dec 08, 2011 8:49 pm

High Chakra Capacity-Those in the Uzumaki Clan are known for their large chakra reserves. Zen has one of the largest.

Flaws/Weaknesses:

Genjutsu?!-
Zen's ability when it comes to genjutsu is one of the worst. He cannot
cast one, and it is difficult for him to break high level genjutsu.

Put in percentages highest being 30& how much chakra you have compared to those of your own rank

also to make the flaw fit state that you cant break it to a certain rank use mine for example

I can break genjutsu but it requies an S rank amount of chakra and i cant break S rank gen
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Post by Kai Terumi on Thu Dec 08, 2011 9:31 pm

Name: Chakra Receiving Seal
Rank: A
Type: Fuinjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This is a jutsu created by Shen so that he can control his Paths without the use of chakra recievers.

Put a range on this
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Post by Akki on Thu Dec 08, 2011 10:18 pm

umm sorry

chakra recievers are a must

but you can use that seal to allow you to temporarily control people through a path

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Post by Blue Spirit on Thu Dec 08, 2011 10:23 pm

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Re: Zen Hyuga(The Speed Demon of Konoha)

Post by Akki on Thu Dec 08, 2011 10:25 pm

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Re: Zen Hyuga(The Speed Demon of Konoha)

Post by Kai Terumi on Thu Dec 08, 2011 10:25 pm

Your flaw still isnt big enough add in that it takes two ranks higher to break a genjutsu so if a d rank was used on you for kai you would need to use a B rank amount of chakra
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Re: Zen Hyuga(The Speed Demon of Konoha)

Post by Blue Spirit on Thu Dec 08, 2011 11:28 pm

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