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Wielder of the Rinnegan

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Wielder of the Rinnegan

Post by Zee on Fri Dec 16, 2011 3:10 am

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Name: Mattaki Meimu
Nickname/Alias: Zee
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Looks:
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Zee is of a good build, six foot four and one hundred ninety pounds or so. his facial features often betray his age and experience. If someone fails to notice his rinnegan, they are likely to mistake him for a chuunin, or even a genin. However, they would be greatly mistaken. Zee is a strong Jounin, who uses the famed rinnegan and it's abilities.

He often wears black pants, a black t-shirt, and a jacket. Around his right leg are some simple ninja tools in pouches, such as kunai. However, he prefers to not have to use these. Around his head, he wears the headband of his village, and goggles, which he uses if he rides one of the summons.

Personality: Zee has been diagnosed with DID, or Dissociative Identity Disorder. This means that he has multiple identities, or selves. The one in control of the body will be described first. This personality is somewhat withdrawn most of the time, but can become open if not meeting new people for the first time. This personality will always fight for his allies, but, there is a limit to what he will do. His morals are important to him. This personality is most similar to a more reserved version of Naruto's personality.

The second personality is a laid back fun guy. He is relaxed most of the time, and acts cool. He is also a bit of a partier. He can, however, be quite serious. If he is pushed far enough, he will fight seriously, and will protect those he knows well. His morals are more relaxed than the primary personality, but are still strong. He will not often bend them. This personality is most similar to Chao Xin from Beyblade Metal Masters.

Zee has also been diagnosed with hypomania, a subtler form of mania, which manifests in him as a need of less sleep than a normal person, as well as a higher metabolism, and, he hears voices. However, unlike most people who hear voices, these actually have a “mind” behind them. This mind is the personality that is currently none dominant. They actually quite frequently get into conversations.

However, Zee has a third personality, much rarer than the other two. Neither of the first two know of this third one, but they do have their suspicions. Occasionally, there are periods that neither of them remember, or there are periods where they both feel suspended from their body. This third personality is dark, brooding, and, some might even say, evil. He has almost a total lack of morals. He occasionally sneaks into Zee's mind, trying to convince him to do one thing versus another. Not often do they go along with this personality, but he seems to be getting better at mind games. Never has this personality been in control of the body. Yet.
Likes & Dislikes: The calm personality likes relaxing, reading a book. The partier likes, well, partying. The one thing they both dislike is the voice in their head.



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Clan Name: Rinnegan
Kekkei Genkai: Rinnegan
Clan Symbol: Rinnegan
Clan Jutsu: Rinnegan Jutsu
Clan History: ...



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Village: Sato o za Engan
Village Rank: Jounin
Skill Rank: A



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Skill Specialty:
Main: Ninjutsu (DUH!)
Sub: Genjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Earth
Sub: Lightning

Special Characteristics:
    Zee is a master of the Body Flicker, able to use it over greater distances than most, and with a single thought instead of a hand sign.
    Has a large chakra supply that he has gathered through intense chakra training, mainly using large range genjutsu

Flaws/Weaknesses:
    His strength is 20% lower than normal
    Hypomania and DID expressed above (think voices in your head, mainly)



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Name: Horn of Genjutsu Holding
Appearance:
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Rank: A
Special Abilities: This weapon can have up to a single genjutsu stored inside of it at any time. this genjutsu is actually stored in the form of a powered, that can be dispersed into the air, or made into a paste by adding it to water. Zee is immune to this powder and paste. If a person is to inhale the dust or have the paste rubbed into their skin, they will fall under the genjutsu, and it is twice as hard to break out as normal. In addition, so long as they continue inhaling the dust (which will dissipate in a maximum of three posts, faster if there are winds) or there is at least one square inch of paste in touch with their body, they will simply refall under the genjutsu. This is not targetable, so any allies in the area will also be caught if the dust is used.
Origin: This weapon is a creation of Zee's. He combined his earth element ninjutsu with the yin release, producing a fine dust. However, this dust had wild and crazy affects, so the horn was made as a type of catalyst, infused with yang chakra so as to counter the spiritual hunger of the yin.


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Name: Mental Barricades
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/Genjutsu
Element: Neutral (yin)
Description: The user can use this technique to place mental blocks in the target's mind that contains valuable information in case the one with the information is captured and interrogated. The barricades look like stylized traditional Japanese sliding doors. According to Inoichi Yamanaka, it is very effective against truth serums.

Name: Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Neutral (yin)
Description: This is a genjutsu that reveals the fears that dwell inside people's hearts. Everyone has an image of the one thing they wouldn't want to ever see. This genjutsu is a technique that draws forth such an image from within the heart and has one mistake it for reality. First, an imaginary circle of leaves will spin around and envelop the target, falling away shortly after. After a short period, the illusion will begin. This is to make the illusion more convincing, since the user will likely have moved before the illusion sets in. If the mental image is a gruesome one, the shock will be accordingly great.

Name: Demonic Illusion: Tree Binding Death
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Neutral (yin)
Description: This is one of the genjutsu that have been passed down since ancient times in Konohagakure. The user first disappears from plain sight in a mist-like fashion in order to approach the target without being detected. Once close enough, the target will then be completely robbed of their mobility as they see the mirage of a fast-growing tree coiling itself around them. Given that the subject remains conscious, this technique proves extremely efficient for information-gathering. Once the target is immobile, the user can then attack the enemy, usually after emerging from the trunk of the tree.

Name: Ephemeral
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Neutral (yin)
Description: Itachi seemingly activates this technique by simply pointing at his target. When the technique was used on Naruto Uzumaki, crows flocked from Itachi and turned into shuriken that bombarded him, and then attempted to put him to sleep. When he resisted the sleep command, Naruto then experienced the sensation of his body parts turning into his closest friends who then tortured him psychologically.

Name: Genjutsu Binding
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Neutral (yin)
Description: As the name suggests, the user binds the opponent in a genjutsu, rendering them incapable of movement. As Tsunade demonstrates when facing the Legendary Stupid Brothers, this genjutsu can be used on more than one target at the same time. Once the target is bound, the user or an ally can rush up to the enemy, able to easily deliver a devastating killing blow.

Name: Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: This genjutsu blinds the enemy with an extremely bright light that appears to emanate from the user's body.
A secondary genjutsu can then be used within this genjutsu. When C used this technique against Taka, he made Jūgo see the Fourth Raikage and Darui smashing Sasuke into the ground.

Name: Mist Servant Technique
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Neutral (yin)
Description: This genjutsu creates eerie black ninja illusions, which appear one by one from trees and rocks, and corner the enemy. Their movements are slow, but when attacked they multiply, and in this way they appear like ghosts inhabiting the mist. Kunai are added to this technique, by throwing them to match illusions movement, making them seem real. As the clones continue to multiply, the victim will eventually be worn down.

Name: Sly Mind Affect Technique
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Neutral (yin)
Description: This technique causes the enemy to walk around in circles for hours by making it seem as if they're walking straight to their desired destination. The enemy eventually becomes exhausted after travelling the same path over and over.

Name: Temple of Nirvana Technique
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Neutral (yin)
Description: A genjutsu that generates a fluttering rain of sleep-inducing, illusory white feathers. Whomever sees them as they fall, piling up and covering the whole target area will experience Eden-like bliss and fall into a state of tranquil slumber. No matter how much one resists the hypnotic spell the desire to sleep is instinctive, and there's no fighting it. However, an experienced shinobi will be able to dispel the genjutsu before it takes effect.

Name: Time Reversal Technique
Rank: B
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Neutral (yin)
Description: This technique puts the target in a state of reverse hypnosis, allowing them to remember details that they otherwise would not. The target will comply with interrogation, but seems to retain his or her personality while under hypnosis. For example, when the ANBU used this technique to bring back Naruto's memories about his conversations with Gennō, Naruto was more specific about the ramen he shared with the old man rather than their conversations, which the ANBU were asking about.
The technique was also used, without success, by an unnamed medical-nin to attempt to reverse Menma's amnesia. Menma's memories eventually returned without the aid of the Time Reversal Technique after the Konoha hospital was struck by lightning. [This jutsu requires all the requirements of real life hypnosis to work, except the willingness if the user's will is greater than the targets will.]

Name: Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings Technique
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Neutral (yin)
Description: A genjutsu that allows one to trick others into mistaking the place they're in for another. This technique's main feature is that it can be cast over an extensive surface, therefore any and all who step into the illusion's area of effect will fall under the spell. That said, it might not work so well on people who are well-versed or otherwise skilled in genjutsu.

Name: Demonic Illusion: Double False Surroundings Technique
Rank:
Type:
Element:
Description: This technique places another illusion within another illusion created by the user. If and when the target dispels the first illusion, they will not realise that a second is in place. [Basically, this is intended to place another Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings withing the first, so that there are actually two of them. Once the first is broken, the second is still in place.]

Name: Bringer-of-Darkness Technique
Rank: A
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Neutral (yin)
Description: This technique exerts an hallucinatory effect upon the eyesight, effectively blinding the opponent. No matter how skilled an opponent may be, they are forced to wait helpless in this world of darkness, as this technique allows the user to attack unseen. Although it negates sight, it does not stop the other senses. In essence, the opponent can hear, feel, and smell out the user of the technique and break its effects by landing one hit.

Name: Self Replacement Technique
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Neutral (yin)
Description: This genjutsu makes an exact duplicate of the user, except that this duplicate is illusory. They will appear to do whatever the user of this technique wishes that they do, within the limits of what the user can actually do. In addition, the actual user will become impossible to see, and everything they say or body sound they make (such as humming) will be done through the illusion, and not them.

Name: Demonic Illusion: Ghost Sound Technique
Rank: D
Type: Genjutsu
Element: Neutral (yin)
Description: This genjutsu will create a ghost sound, be it an explosion, a speech, or a screech, within the users audible range.

Name: Earth Release Barrier: Earth Prison Dome of Magnificent Nothingness
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: This technique traps the victims inside a self-repairing dome of earth which is almost instantaneously able to reform, even after Kiba hit it with his Passing Fang. Jirōbō was able to absorb the chakra of anyone trapped inside, something he enjoyed greatly. However, Jirōbō's chakra was not evenly distributed throughout the dome. Near the back, relative to him, his chakra was much weaker, making the dome weaker in that spot.

Name: Earth Release: Underground Projection Fish Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: This technique is used for sneaking and striking silently, like a fish underwater, and then suddenly appearing to the ground's surface. Furthermore, it's even more efficient when employed in a crowded area that, if the target notices something, can be overrun by the nearby masses, or with distractions like a Clone Technique to draw the enemy's attention. As such it is a great strategy for a guerilla, and a likely resort, used quite often for things such as personality assassination.

Name: Shadow Clone Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Neutral
Description: Similar to the Clone Technique, this technique creates clones of the user. However, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing techniques on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. They can also disperse on their own. The clones will be created in roughly the same condition as the original. Shadow clones can't be distinguished from the actual person even by the Byakugan because the clones have the exact same amount of chakra and aren't made from any other substance.

Name: Telescope Technique
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Neutral
Description: A technique that uses a crystal ball to track a particular individual anywhere they are. There are a few restrictions about the person that is subjected to pursuit. The user must know that person's chakra pattern. If someone can be targeted for pursuit, they may be very far away, the crystal ball will be able to confirm their position. As this technique is infallible for intelligence purposes, the Third Hokage used it to maintain public order in the village

Name: Earth Spear
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: The user flows chakra through all parts of their body causing it to become noticeably darker, which increases their defensive power to its utmost limits by making the skin as hard as diamond. Furthermore, the destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great all-purpose technique. The amount of techniques that can break through the areas hardened by the Earth Spear are close to zero, excluding its undeniable weak point: Lightning Release ninjutsu. Kakuzu used this technique through the use of his earth-element mask.
Kakuzu demonstrated the ability to use this to cover himself partially (i.e. his hand and lower arm, and the side of his head) without using handsigns, which gave him a significant tactical advantage against ambushes.

Name: Earth Release: Tunneling Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: The user is able to create a wide tunnel in the ground, this cannot travel through rock though. The large tunnel that is created allows the user to transport others without detection.

Name: Earth Release: Earth Flow Divide
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: By flowing concentrated chakra from one's palms into the Dragon Veins (龍脈, Ryūmyaku) flowing underground, one can tear the earth apart, creating large chasms. The length, width, direction, and curve of the chasm are all up to the user. Manipulating the Dragon Veins requires fine chakra control, but if one has such skill, they can use this technique to divide the space between the enemy and their own team in two, destroy enemy camps or defences, and even to attack.

Name: Earth Release: Moving Earth Core
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: The user lowers or raises the ground in the surrounding area at high speeds, allowing them to create giant holes in the ground or avoid attacks. The size of the affected area as well as the depths that it is lowered to is also up to the user. Other than being moved below ground relative to the surrounding surface the terrain is not altered as plant life and people retain their same positions.

Name: Earth Release: Rock Shelter
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: The user surrounds themselves with earth, taken from the immediate vicinity, in order to fabricate a formation of rock that is capable of protecting both the user and others in close proximity, if desired. Doing so, seemingly leaves the surrounding terrain unaltered, even when the quantity of earth used is enough to form a complete dome around multiple individuals as seen when Ittan used this technique.[1][2]
The user can also manipulate the resulting shelter to have openings in it so as to be able to observe outside, as demonstrated when used by Kitsuchi.

Name: Earth Release: Earth Style Wall
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Earth
Description: The user creates a solid wall of earth as a form of defence. Chakra is either converted to earth within the body and then spat out to form the wall or the user can manipulate pre-existing earth to form the wall. The earth then instantly rises up and takes form. The barrier itself is also coated with chakra, making its strength incomparable to that of a normal mud wall. Because of the earth's special characteristics, the wall is highly resistant against, for instance, fire and water. Also, for a Kage-class shinobi it is possible to create a vast volume of earth. When used by Kakashi he creates a wall composed of bulldog sculptures to box-in Pain.

Name: Lightning Coating
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Lightning
Description: The user coats themselves in a "shield" of lightning. While this shield offers no increase in strength, durability, speed, or anything of the like, anything that comes in contact with it, besides the user of course, will be shocked, meaning that any part of the body that comes into contact with the lightning or something that is conducting it is numbed.


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History:
Mattaki was born into a broken family. His father was abusive, and his mother to scared to do anything. Luckily for Mattaki, his father was abusive to his mother, not to him. However, this does not mean he was nice to Mattaki. Often was he sent to his room, most of the time literally thrown in, until one day, he burst. His eyes changed, becoming concentric black circles in a white ocean. In this instant, something snapped in Mattaki. He looked at his father, and could take him no more. His chakra exploded out of his body, changing the very scenery around them into a grotesque mess of what appeared to be organs. Mattaki's body ached as more chakra poured out of him. What had originally been an illusion was now real. The organs that had simply been a figment of his imagination, began digesting his father. The man did not stand a chance. Mattaki was of the mere age of seven when this happened.
It had taken an incredible amount of will power for Mattaki to stop the release of his chakra enough for the illusion to stop, and that had left him drained. When his mother found Mattaki, collapsed in the blood of the half gone body of her husband, she had no clue what to do, but cry. She collapsed next to the man she loved, who had not loved her back, and picked up the small boy. She cried into his limp shoulder, until he woke up. Then, they both left the house, the little village in which they had lived their whole lives, and went to Sato o za Engan, the nearest ninja village for, that was what Mattaki was, a ninja.
He was immediately placed into training to be a ninja, not entering the ninja academy, for it was feared that knowledge of his eyes would attract unwanted attention. No, instead, he was tutored by the most trusted tutor privately, teaching him genjutsu, and helping him along the path of discovery into his ocular powers. This teacher was to be his first Path. The woman died on a mission, and her body was brought back to the village. She had stated in her will that, if Mattaki had desired, she would gladly give up her body to be a Path. Mattaki took her up on the offer. She became his Animal Path, the first one who's abilities he had mastered in their entirety.
It was around this time that Mattaki abandoned his given name, for the simple name Zee. His mother had been killed by a robber. Mattaki had sworn revenge, and followed the trail of this man. He was not even a ninja, just a civilian who was in some hard times. Mattaki yelled out at him, just before killing him, that “I AM LIKE THE LETTER Z, THE LAST THING!” With that, he made the man's worst nightmare come into actuality, mastering the second ability of his rinnegan, the Sakkaku path. Those final words of his before killing the man would leave a lasting impact on him, in the form of a name.
In the time since, he collected one more body, that of an opponent he defeated, and turned that person into a Path, his Sakkaku Path. Now he is a proud ninja of his village, known both within and without, by the persons in the know, as Zee.
RP Sample:
Zee stood at his end of the field. It was his turn to fight. All he knew about the person he was facing was that he was a Konoha shinobi, as indicated by the symbol on his hood. Zee was still using the false feet, and he was lucky the chuunin exams were still happening at all. Konoha was pretty much gone, but he was there, in a field, ready to fight, waiting for his first opponent.

The other guy got there, finally. He was a large guy, and Zee almost laughed. Almost. The announcer said that this was a fight between Zee Yoru and Ookii Akimichi to continue on to the semifinals of the chuunin exams. Zee was happy. Perhaps this guy’s large size would help offset the fact that Zee could not move fast.

Zee was wearing just regular clothing, a t-shirt and a pair of light sweats. He had his antitoxin with him, stored in the tag tied around his wrist. He also had the large quantities of the Hyde potion with him, stored in the seal inscribed on the inside of his cheek. He did not plan on using, however, for he did not want the downside that came with Hyde, his personality.

Zee took a stance, placing his right foot in front of him, his left foot behind, feeling then swinging before settling down. His right arm was placed out in front of him, while his left was placed over his left Katana. He waited for the match to start, where he would pull his sword just the smallest bit out of its sheath, waiting for Ookii to make the first move.

Ookii got the battle started nice and fast. He made himself larger, and rounder. Then, somehow, he pulled his arms, legs, and head into his body. It was an incredibly weird thing, but Zee ignored it, worried more about the fact that a giant human boulder was rolling right at his. Zee was not fast enough to dodge on his feet. He let his sword drop back into it’s holster. His only chance was to be able to slow the guy down. If he got lucky, he would pull off two things at once. He made fifty nine of his own variety of lightning style shadow clones. Doing this nearly depleted him of chakra, but it was the only chance he had. Each one of them tried to stop Ookii, before dispersing in a release of lightning. After the first one exploded, Ookii was unable to control his movements, and kept plowing towards Zee. However, his clones had slowed the guy down enough for Zee to jump out of the way by the thinnest margin. Then, Zee stood up, and grabbed his swords out, walking over to Ookii, who had crashed into the wall and released the technique. Zee held his blade to Ookii’s chest, and placed the other on his leg. Ookii submitted.

The next day, after Zee had had a chance to rest up, it was time for the second round. He was facing a ninja from Sunagakure. She had a large wrapped thing on her back. That made him think she was a puppet master. This one would be interesting. The announcer announced the start of the match, and got out fast. Zee took his stance again, same as last time, and waited for the man girl to make her move. His strategy from yesterday would not work, and the altered version he had come up with would not either. The girl made some hand signs likely puppet master technique Zee thought. He was right. As the girl finished her hand signs, she threw her arms back onto the thing strapped to her back, and the puppet burst out of them. It was a tall puppet, but it was slender, almost like a lot of tooth picks. Zee wondered what was special about it. Well, there’s only one way to find out Zee ran towards the puppet, drawing both of his swords.

”Big mistake there, buddy” the girl said, pulling back her middle finger while extending her pointer on the opposite finger. The puppets right arm flew up, and the wrist slit as the hand went up on a hinge. A cloud of purple smoke was release. Zee could not help breathing it in. Then, under the cover of the poison, She launched senbon at Zee, expecting him to be paralyzed. However, Zee was far from it. He had temporary resistance to any poison. It would be a little while before it got to him. He had to take this moment. He ducked, having heard the firing mechanism start up, still fully within the cloud of smoke. Zee then grabbed the arm of the puppet, and launched off of it, perpendicular to the line between the girl and her puppet. The arm held as he swung in an arc, and release, a trail of poison following him. He had launched himself straight at the girl. “You use poison, now, do you? Well, two can play THAT game.” Zee took a moment to route chakra to the small growth in his throat. A small pair of muscles moved aside, allowing the long dormant gases to escape. He also drew his swords as a something that would hopefully make her think his swords were coated in poison. He swung down at her, but, before he could finish, the puppet appeared in front of him, just barely getting between Zee and the Sunagakure girl. Four things on either arm rose out, and Zee’s swords hit a chakra shield, unable to pierce them. Then, with a simple twitch of her pinky finger, the girl made the puppets mouth open wide, and a small metal pipe came out. Not even a second later, it was blasting out fire, right in Zee’s face. “AAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!” he screams, as it hit him dead on. It hurt incredibly badly, but Zee was able to retain consciousness, able to still move. The girl, on the other hand, was not so lucky. His scream had expelled large amounts of poison, and she had breathed it in. She collapsed, as did her puppet, as the jutsu ceased. Zee got onto his hands and knees, in extreme pain, but pushed through it, and crawled over to the girl. He grabbed his sword from where he had dropped it and went “submit.” The girl obliged, and they were both rushed to the medics stations, where both were cured of their poison, and Zee’s burns were largely healed, leaving only a tender red mark on his face.

Zee had made it to the finals. It was held off a few days to allow both Zee and his opponent to heal up after their previous battles. Now, they had both healed up, and were standing in the field where the chuunin exams were being held. All he knew was that his opponent was from the village hidden in the mist. Then, Zee saw him. He was wearing a large mask, much like Zee had once worn, but a little cleaner, with smoother lines. He likely also had the poison sac of a salamander implanted into him. He also had two swords, both of which were quite long, as long as their user was tall. Those will be hard to deal with. “Let me guess, you are a salamander guy, aren’t you?” The boy looked back, a blank expression. Not a talkative one. Let me fight, Zee. I want to kill someone. No way. A) I don’t want people knowing about you. B) Killing isn’t allowed here. Mr. Hyde grumbled and walked back into the metaphorical corner of Zee’s mind. Zee then refocused on the fight.

It had already started, and there was a blade practically at his throat. He was just barely able to pull his sword mostly out of its sheath, to where the boys would get caught on his. It was a good, solid deflection. Zee then pulled his other sword all the way out, and swung, but the boy deflected that one. They were caught, each blocking the others blade, caught in a stalemate, a catch twenty two. Should either of them try to do anything else, they would leave an opening for their opponents blade. Zee knew his poison would be useless at this moment. The boy had a mask on. In addition, they likely had the same poison. Neither of them would be affected by the others poison. Of course, the boy would not know this. So, Zee thought over what he could do at this moment. Then, the boy acted first. He jumped away fast enough to completely avoid the speed of Zee’s blade.

Now they both recognized that the other was just as good a swordsman as them. This battle would not be decided with swords. Both of them sheathed their swords. The boy took off the clasps on his mask, and let it fall to the ground. He either wanted this battle over fast, or he thought Zee had a lot of power. Either way, Zee was happy the boy was taking this truly seriously. Zee made a hand sign as three of his specific type of clones appeared, each starting to glow read, then with black seeping over their body. Then, their bodies changed again. Chakra started flowing around them, in a way eerily similar to the way it did around a nine-tails host, minus the tails. This alone should have scared the boy. However, at this final stage, long spikes grew from there backs, curving around, and becoming legs, eight legs, that moved the clones around just like spiders. The three of them scuttled towards the boy. He did not flinch. At least, not until they were in close range of him. He noticed all too late that they were unaffected by his poison. One of them scraped their fingers on him, and that was all it took. Zee dispersed the clones before they could do more damage. The boy was on the ground, curled up in the fetal position, screaming his lungs out. Zee walked over to him. He did not need to hold his sword to the boy this time. He said “Concede,” and the boy did so. Then again, it was hard to be sure of this over the blood curdling screams of fear, but the referee ended the match. The boy was no longer able to fight, Then, Zee helped the medics calm him down. Zee explained what happened in short and then let him rest, to get over the things likely still going through his mind. Zee looked up at the Kage, hoping he would become a chuunin on this day, after a long, hard fight had concluded in victory.


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Re: Wielder of the Rinnegan

Post by Zee on Fri Dec 16, 2011 3:59 pm

Rinnegan Stuff:

Name: Implanting the Eye
Rank: A
Type: Rinnegan ninjutsu
Element: Yin-Yang
Description: This jutsu's only purpose is to turn one or both eyes of the target into Rinnegan. It requires a very long ritual, meaning that it cannot be done in the midst of battle. This jutsu is how Nagato implanted the Rinnegan into his paths. This jutsu does not, however, stick the chakra receivers into the body. Instead, this must be done separately, using the chakra disruption blades.

Name: Chakra Disruption Blades
Rank: A
Type: Rinnegan Ninjutsu/Tools
Element: Neutral (Yin-Yang)
Description: The Chakra Disruption Blades are blades made from the same material as the chakra receivers used by Nagato. They originated from the black rod in the Demonic Statue of the Outer Path's abdomen. Pain creates the blades as needed from both arms of any path, with no apparent limit to their length. Pain can also detach the blade from the arms when requiring to use several of them, or to be thrown as harpoons.
The effect of being stabbed with the blade:
These blades disrupt the chakra of its victim, rendering them incapable of moving. When a victim is stabbed by the blades, the Rinnegan appears in their mind, suggesting that Nagato has some degree of influence over them, similar to how he controls the Six Paths. The blades are very sharp, as they were able to pierce the skin of Sage Mode users. The blades themselves are hard enough to break scalpels though it is shown that they too can be broken with enough strength. In the anime, they are shown to have a red reflection.
Nagato, due to being immobile, can fire his chakra disruption blades from his mechanical seat, which then allows him to control the victims like one of the paths due to the close proximity between each other. Naruto was able to resist Nagato's influence with the help of both Sage Mode and the Nine-Tails chakra.

Animal Path:

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The Animal Path's main abilities revolved around summoning various animals and creatures to aid it in battle. Each creature served a different purpose in battle, much like every Path of Pain was also different from the others. Each animal summon also has the Rinnegan and as such Nagato is able to see through their eyes as well. Each animal had various body piercings as well, suggesting that they too were under his control.
The animal path which Zee has made has ability in Taijutsu, as she would be able to clash with Naruto Uzumaki for a short time despite him being in Sage Mode, if he were around. Worthy of note, the Animal Path requires no blood sacrifice or hand seals when summoning creatures, but uses hand seals to summon via the tags.


Name: Amplification Summoning Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu/Summoning
Element: Neutral (yin-yang)
Description: This is a summoning technique that in which the summoned creature is given a special condition and when that condition is met it gains a certain ability.
Pain applied this technique to his dog summon. Upon being struck by a direct attack, the canine could divide into another identical beast and increase its power. The beast can then recombine if needed, with one body carrying the heads of however many additional beasts were created.

Name: Giant Drill-Beaked Bird
Rank: N/A
Type: Rinnegan Summoning
Element: Neutral
Description: Appearance:
The bird itself is unusual, as not only does it demonstrate a prominent and jagged beak, but it also features three distinct legs (and wings in the manga).
Abilities:
This summon can move at an incredibly fast speed, and can use that velocity combined with its beak to form powerful dive attacks. In the anime, the bird had additional abilities where it could lay a large quantity of eggs, that subsequently explode like bombs and while flying low over Konoha produced dust clouds strewn with lightning in its wake.

Name: Giant Multi-Headed Dog
Rank: N/A
Type: Rinnegan Summon
Element: Neutral
Description: A large, multi-headed dog with wings, this summon has a number of body piercings and Rinnegan.
Abilities
It was modified by Pain using the Amplification Summoning Technique, so that it can split apart, when struck, into individual dogs that can then merge back together. It gains additional heads every time it splits in this way, and each duplicated head carries the Chakra Receiver and the Rinnegan like the original. According to Nagato, the only way it can be defeated is by defeating its original summoner. In the anime, this summon is seen at different sizes, ranging from several stories tall to just tall enough to fit underneath trees.
This dog is also physically strong and resilient, since it broke through an ANBU Captain's Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop technique, and another's Lightning Release: Sixteen Pillar Bind, and received no more than minor burns from Fire Release: Fired Pottery Technique despite having its legs cut off by the Wind Release: Wind Cutter. Even a usually devastating attack, such as the Wind Release: Rasenshuriken couldn't kill it easily, as the dog merely continued to multiply.

Name: Giant Snake-Tailed Chameleon
Rank: N/A
Type: Rinnegan Summon
Element: Neutral
Description: This summon is a large chimera-like chameleon with snake for a tail. Like all of Nagato's summons, it has a number of body piercings and Rinnegan, implying that it is being controlled.
Abilities
Much like a real-life chameleon, this creature can also blend with its surroundings for camouflage, so perfectly that it renders itself completely invisible to other viewers around. This ability has been used by the Animal Path of Pain to step inside the chameleon's mouth and attack his opponents by surprise. As perfect as it may be, however, this camouflage can be detected by barrier-related techniques, as when Jiraiya tried to use his Barrier: Canopy Method Formation to locate it, Pain had the chameleon distance itself from him, and attacked him with an offensive summon. Another reptilian trait that the chameleon shows is the ability to crawl on vertical and inclined surfaces, such as walls. Also, it has exhibited great destruction capabilities, as it could fend off attacks from Konoha ninja and wreck houses and buildings during Pain's invasion of Konoha. The snake-tail can be used as a prehensile limb, to be able to grab and capture intended targets for Pain with its tongue, as shown during the Fourth Shinobi World War

Name: Giant Panda
Rank: N/A
Type: Rinnegan Summon
Element: Neutral
Description: Appearance
It resembles a regular panda bear with the exception that it has a number of large piercings all over its body, wears a sash around its waist and possesses Rinnegan eyes.
Abilities
The Giant Panda had the ability to harden its body creating a defensive barricade for its summoner. Like all other animals summoned by Pain, it is likely that the animal had a shared field of vision with Nagato.

Name: Giant Ox
Rank: N/A
Type: Rinnegan Summon
Element: Neutral
Description: Appearance
With an appearance similar to a normal ox, this summon has a number of body piercings, along with Rinnegan, implying it was being controlled by Pain.
Abilities
This summon, by its sheer size possesses a great deal of brute strength. Also, because it has Rinnegan eyes, it possesses a field of shared vision with Nagato.

Name: Giant Rhino
Rank: N/A
Type: Rinnegan Summon
Element: Neutral
Description: Appearance
Resembling a normal rhinoceros, it had a number of body piercings and Rinnegan, implying it is being controlled by Pain as well as dark marking around its eyes and a circular one on its forehead.
Abilities
Because of its sheer size and nature, it had great brute force, able to destroy an entire building after charging into it. Also, due to it possessing Rinnegan eyes, it is likely that it had a shared field of vision with Nagato.

Name: Giant Crustacean
Rank: N/A
Type: Rinnegan Summon
Element: Neutral
Description: Appearance
Though resembling a normal crustacean, this summon has a number of body piercings, implying it is being controlled by Pain.
Abilities
This crustacean is able to use Water Release techniques such as the Water Release: Wild Bubble Wave technique.

Name: Water Release: Wild Bubble Wave
Rank: C
Type: Rinnegan Summoning's Jutsu: Giant Crustacean
Element: Water
Description: The user spits out a large volume of bubbles which covers the ground and reduces friction, considerably limiting the opponents' movements. The bubbles are spit out with violent force that is capable of washing away most attacks, such as oil and fire. This technique can also be used as an effective smokescreen.

Name: Giant Centipede
Rank: N/A
Type: Rinnegan Summoning
Element: Neutral
Description:Appearance
This giant centipede summon has a number of body piercings and the Rinnegan, implying it is being controlled by Pain.
Abilities
Though not much was seen of its abilities, it did use its body to demolish buildings in Konohagakure.

Name: Summoning by the Symbol
Rank: C
Type: Summoning
Element: Neutral (yin-yang)
Description: The user can make seals, such as Minato's seal, but for a different purpose. Anyone who carries around one of these seals may be summoned at the creators whim. This works similarly to a traditional summoning. The summoned also has the right to deny being summoned, however, they do not have long to deny it, just a fraction of a second, and the warning comes as a light shock to their body, something that could be easily mistaken as something else. It takes a fair amount of training to prevent yourself from being summoned in this manner.
Sakkaku Path:

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The Sakkaku Path is the Path which transcends the border between illusion and reality. This Path is able to use and genjutsu that Zee knows, in addition to the Nise Kara Mi. This Path is more likely to stay back and let the Animal Path fight until there is an opening to cast it's (gen)jutsu(s) as it's physical strength and speed are sub-par. Alternatively, it may ride on one of the summons of the Animal Path, and has great staying ability when riding them.


Name: Nise Kara Mi - Real From False
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Neutral (yang)
Description: The abilities of this path are to take genjutsu, and bring them into reality. This jutsu relies heavily upon the yang chakra, to make the very spiritual genjutsu into an actual, physical thing. This effect will last 3 posts and will have a ten post cool down. Anything that the creation of this actual thing destroys or erases will be reversed once it cancels. However, any damage done after its creation will remain. For example, if a village has a genjutsu placed over it that makes all inside think they are in the forest, and this jutsu is used, the forest will become real and the village will temporarily cease to exist. Anyone who is harmed due to being in this forest will remain harmed. The village, however, will be back, completely unchanged, once this jutsu wears off. The act of making it real means that, not only the people caught in it will experience it, but everyone in the area of affect will experience it.
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Re: Wielder of the Rinnegan

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Re: Wielder of the Rinnegan

Post by Kyōfu Namikaze on Fri Dec 16, 2011 8:45 pm

His strength is low (Shikamaru)

How low is it?I need in it % Is he 20% less strength then shinobi his rank.

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Re: Wielder of the Rinnegan

Post by Zee on Fri Dec 16, 2011 8:52 pm

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