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Name: Mushi Uchiha (Also known as Moshi)
Nickname/Alias: The black Uchiha
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Looks: Mushi is a rare dark skinned Uchiha. He has a tanish skin that goes along his body texture. His skin is very tan but a little dark. Mushi perfers to be more dark but he doesn't like waiting in the sun for who know's long. Mushi has a 6 pack and rock hard ribs. For reasons sake, Mushi's father had hard ribs just like his. Like other black male characters, Mushi has a big dark black dick. Mushi is often to get boners around girls, but it really shows in his pants. Mushi is use to wearing a black coat that hangs around his shirt. The shirt has a huge cross coming around the middle. Mushi doesn't like showing off but he is one of the cocky ones. Mushi is use to wearing his black shoes. They go with his black pants that he doesn't show off at ALL. His shorts is full of Uchiha clan marks but the main UChiha mark is the big one behind his shirt.

Personality: Mushi is one of the slow smooth types. He knows how to talk to ladys and always greets them in a fine matter. Mushi doesn't care for revenge or anything brutal in that matter. Though he had left the hidden left village. Mushi was thinking of joining an organzation called the Uchiha Police but that group doesn't exist anymore. Mushi is quiet to male shinobi. But the most thing he loves to do is fight others. He doesn't care if someone dies but if its a comrade he'll cry and weep. Moshi is mostly gentle men for the most part.
Likes & Dislikes: Likes: Woman, Sex, Boobs, Vagina's, and fighting. Dislikes: Bi's, gay kids, lesbones, and training.
Catch Phrase: 1.Is that all you got punk? 2.You can do better dan dat bitch! 3.Prepare for the finale nigga!

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Clan Name: Uchiha
Kekkei Genkai: The Uchiha were famous for their powerful chakra, exceptionally strong techniques, and natural aptitude for anything combat-related. The clan possessed a proficiency in fire techniques, having created several and using them more skilfully than any other. Their signature technique was the Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique. Clan members were not recognised as adults by the rest of the clan until they could successfully use this technique. The Uchiha were also highly known for their mastery of ninja tools. They themselves invented many shuriken move sets which required the use of thin metal wires, one example being the Windmill Triple Blades technique.

The Uchiha clan were most feared for their powerful Sharingan, a kekkei genkai which gives them the ability to see the "colours" of chakra, allowing them to analyse and copy their opponent's skills, along with a number of other abilities. Only a select few members of the Uchiha clan manifested the Sharingan. Due to their natural affinity for battle, and their proficiency with eye genjutsu, many ninjas considered it more tactically favourable to flee rather than face an Uchiha shinobi in one-on-one combat. Among the techniques granted by the Sharingan, the Izanagi is deemed to be forbidden, due to it rendering the user blind in exchange for temporarily manipulating reality and fantasy within the user's own personal space, such as turning injuries and even death inflicted upon the user into mere illusions. Though the clan was feared for their Sharingan, the eyes have also been transplanted into various characters outside the clan.

Madara Uchiha was the first to develop an advanced form of the Sharingan, the Mangekyō Sharingan, which can be activated by the pain of losing close friends or family members. However, frequent use of the Mangekyō Sharingan deteriorates the user's eyesight and results in blindness. Only by taking the eyes of a sibling can one's vision be restored, a process that results in the creation of an Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan (永遠の万華鏡写輪眼, Eien no Mangekyō Sharingan). Itachi indicated that the intricacies of the Mangekyō Sharingan were only discovered after years of trial and error, implying that many Uchiha throughout history had made the attempt to gain the Mangekyō Sharingan.
One member of the clan, Madara, had managed to awaken the Rinnegan, shortly before his death. As it has been hinted that this was a natural evolution of the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan, there remains the potential for others in possession of the latter to awaken the ability too. However, the exact requirements involved in this process have yet to be disclosed.[2]
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Clan Jutsu:
Clan History: The Uchiha clan descended from the elder of the two sons of the Sage of the Six Paths. The elder brother inherited the Sage's "eyes", powerful chakra and spiritual abilities. When it came time for the Sage to choose a successor, he questioned the two on what course of action they would follow to bring order to the world. The elder believed that power was the way to bring peace, while the younger believed love was the way. The Sage favoured the ideal of the younger brother, and therefore designated the younger as his successor, causing the elder to be filled with jealousy and hate. From this hate came what Tobi calls the Curse of Hatred (憎しみの呪い, Nikushimi no Noroi). From the younger son descended the Senju clan who would be the eternal rivals of the Uchiha.
Before the founding of the ninja villages, the Uchiha were one of the many mercenary clans for hire. Because of their Sharingan, the Uchiha clan came to be known as one of the two strongest clans, the other being the Senju clan. Madara Uchiha was particularly powerful, and, upon attaining the Mangekyō Sharingan, he took control of the clan. Under his leadership the Uchiha grew stronger, conquering whatever clans they came upon, such that, whenever the Uchiha clan was hired for a job, the opposing side would hire the Senju, and vice versa.

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Village: Nami
Village Rank: Jounin
Skill Rank: A

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Skill Specialty:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Kenjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Fire
Sub: Lightning

Special Characteristics:

Quick Learner- Moshi is very quick at learning jutsu, skills, and elements. For every training post its -100 words for the total amount of words you need to learn something.
Flaws/Weaknesses: Less Math skills- Moshi doesn't pay attention to math skills. Like the angle in which a kunai can hit a tree and how to throw ninja tolls properly.

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Name: The Cursed Blade: Arugsi
Appearance:The bloody Uchiha [WIP] ZolosSandaiKitestsu
Rank: B
Special Abilities: Moshi can contribute chakra into this blade, mostly his lightning chakra.
Origin: Moshi used it since he was elected for jounin. To this day he still uses it.

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Fire Ninjutsu:

Name: Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and expelled from the mouth in a massive orb of roaring flame or as a continuous flamethrower. The scope of the attack is altered by controlling the volume of chakra that is mustered. The released flames will engulf their target, and leave a crater on the ground's surface. This technique apparently requires more than average chakra reserves and most genin should not be able to do this technique.
The Uchiha clan also uses this technique as a "coming of age" rite and as such was a common and one of the more favoured technique amongst them.

Name: Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: This technique creates a volley of small fireballs, which are sent flying in an unpredictable manner assaulting the enemy. In addition, the flames are controlled one by one with chakra, so avoiding them all is extremely difficult. Shuriken can also be concealed within the flames, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. Like the flames, the shuriken can be controlled with chakra. For the most part, however, this technique is used as a distraction.

Name: Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Flower Nail Crimson
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: The user unleashes a volley of shuriken with one hand, while at the same time exhaling fire-infused chakra onto them in order to increase the weapons' destructive potential by making them capable of inflicting severe burns upon direct contact with either the intended victim or any other object caught within their trajectories.
Due to the chakra-based nature of the flames that surround them, the shuriken will continue to burn after impact, regardless of the flammability of the object that they ultimately collide with.

Name:Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: The user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body and changes it into a dragon-shaped fireball. The user then skilfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent. Even outside of the attack range, its power and reliability are stressed. The flames have a high temperature, as they can create an upward movement of air currents which in turn can give rise to thunder clouds. A master of this technique can fire off several flames in succession and anyone caught in the technique could potentially be reduced to ashes.

Name: Fire Release: Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: The user breathes fire along a cord or any other type of long object, which rushes forward in straight line catching the enemy on fire. A line of enemies can be used as the conductor as well.[2] The flames are meant to target, and assault the enemy's upper body just like a projectile weapon.
While the technique is shown in the anime to be even larger and more devastating than Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique (and being able to melt rock), in the manga it is shown to be just a small burst of flame running along a line of wire.

Name: Fire Shield
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: Katon
Description: A fire shield that covers the user's body from jutsu. This attack is useless to water. But the other elements it can handle.
Classic Ninjutsu:

Name: Body Flicker
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: his technique is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed.[2] To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and the intended destination. Shisui Uchiha was feared as "Shisui of the Body Flicker" (瞬身のシスイ, Shunshin no Shisui), likely referring to this technique.
The different hidden villages have variations of the Body Flicker Technique, all of which involve some extra element aside from the movement itself. The extra element is usually some sort of substance used to distract the opponent, such as leaves or sand. Gaara, for instance, uses the Sand Body Flicker (砂瞬身, Suna-Shunshin), which uses sand to cover his movements. Other varieties include the Mist Body Flicker (霧瞬身, Kiri-Shunshin), Water Body Flicker (水瞬身, Mizu-Shunshin), and Leaf Body Flicker (木ノ葉瞬身, Konoha-Shunshin). The Fourth Raikage combined the Body Flicker Technique with the Lightning Release Armour which allowed him to dodge even Amaterasu in a split second.

Name: Clone Great Explosion
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This technique is used to create a Shadow Clone that can be detonated. The clone looks like a normal shadow clone, which allows the user to get it close to the target without them expecting anything besides a normal attack, or the target might even close in willingly to try to attack the clone. Using multiple tricks and diversionary tactics to disguise the nature of the clone can make this technique more likely to be effective.

Name: Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Similar to the Clone Technique, this technique creates clones of the user. However, these clones are actual copies, not illusions. The user's chakra is evenly distributed among every clone, giving each clone an equal fraction of the user's overall power. The clones are capable of performing techniques on their own and can even bleed, but will usually disperse after one or two solid blows. They can also disperse on their own. The clones will be created in roughly the same condition as the original.

Name: Moon Walk
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This move was created by Moshi over his long period of time training. This move is similar to the move called 'After Image' and 'Shupo'. Except Moonwalk is both of them fused togther. Moshi jumps into the sky and walks onto in using Shupo and sending his body towards something with afterimage except he leaves no after image apperances and goes much faster than the average shinobi.

Name: After Image
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This move was also one of the moves Moshi created over his long period of training. He calls it 'The next speed after image'. Moshi moves from a side to another side without warning or anything. But it leaves a image from where he was before. Though this jutsu can move up to 5 yards. Moshi uses this to avoid most jutsu, and it works without sweat.

Name: Shupo
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: This move was one of the most hardest moves Moshi learned from a long period of training. This move is even x10 faster than the 'afterimage' and can leave out a huge gust of wind while moving with this jutsu. Moshi uses this to become faster at a instant.

Name: Combination Transformation
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: An advanced form of the Transformation Technique, the Combination Transformation transforms two users into one being. In some cases, when one user is preocupied or cannot use hand seals, one may performs the necessary hand seals, while the other may provide the chakra. Naruto used this method with Gamabunta in their fight against Gaara's full Shukaku form to assume the appearance of a giant fox (the Nine-Tailed Demon Fox in the anime). The Sound Four used this during the Chūnin Exam Arc to disguise themselves as the Fourth Kazekage's bodyguards (two in each). Kiba and Akamaru created their own variation of this technique with the Human Beast Combination Transformation: Double-Headed Wolf.

Name: Summoning Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: The Summoning Technique is a space–time ninjutsu that allows the summoner to transport animals across long distances instantly.
Before an animal summoning can be performed, a prospective summoner must first sign a contract with a given species.[4] The contract comes in the form of a scroll, on which the contractor uses their own blood to sign their name and place their fingerprints and once signed is valid even after the contractors death.[5] After this they need only offer an additional donation of blood on the hand they signed the contract with, mold their chakra with hand seals and then plant the hand they signed the contract with at the location they wish to summon the creature.[6] The amount of chakra used during the summoning determines how powerful the summoned creature can be. In the anime, it was shown that if a user attempts to summon an animal without first signing a contract, the user will be teleported to the home of the animal they have a natural affinity for.
Moshi's animal- Snake/Hawk
Lightning Ninjutsu:

Name: Lightning Ball
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Moshi concertrates a glowing ball of lightning into his hand shaping it into a ball thats sparking with chakra. As he uses the jutsu chakra surrounds Moshi as he builds more chakra into it. Moshi can do this in 5 seconds and then he smashes the ball into an oppenet's stomach. (Similar to Rasengan)

Name: El Thor
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: El Thor (神の裁き(エル・トール) Kami no Sabaki [Eru Tōru]?, literally translated as "Judgment of God"): Mostly used to destroy villages, Moshi focuses a large cluster of electricity above his target, then uses it to send a huge and powerful lightning bolt crashing down from the sky, frying the unlucky target. He can also use this attack to launch a massive thunder stream from his hand.[1] Thor is the Norse god of thunder.

Name: Raigo
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Raigo/Ragal (雷迎 Raigō?, literally translated as "Thunder Greeting"): Also known as the Advent of Thunder, Enel creates a huge spherical cloud filled with electricity. The ball has enough power to destroy an entire island. It is created by the combined powers of Lightning and Fire.[14] "Raigō" is the term used for the coming of Amida Buddha to welcome the spirits of the dead, but here the "Rai" stands for thunder.

Name: Raigo
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Element: N/A
Description: Sango (稲妻(サンゴ) Inazuma [Sango]?, literally translated as "Lightning"): Moshi unleashes a massive charge of electricity from his hand that forms a wide blast used to devastate large areas with a target near by in mind.

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History: The young Uchiha was born from a black male and a white female. The baby was born at midnight when the doctor had just delivered the young boy. "Well that took long enough" the baby's mother said. "It sure did...And it cost me not even a ryo!" the baby's father said. The mothers name was ShiShi and the father's name was Antho. "Hmmm...THis baby needs a good name for his face..." ShiShi said. "How about Moshi?" Antho called out. "Nah....Mushi sounds better" ShiShi protested. "Whatever...But I'm never calling him Mushi ever" Antho said. ShiShi eyeballed him for awhile. Later they moved into a village named Nami where they raised the little baby. The baby sooned moved into the acadmey and learned many arts about ninjutsu and taijutsu. He studied more about kenjutsu over time. And so he would study each day about 10 pages of the Ninja TextBook. Soon came the finale exam and he WAS ready. The finale exam talked about most things in the book but some where about kenjutsu, Ninjutsu, and Taijutsu. But more ADVANCED. Moshi manged to pass it but his real adventure was just starting.

Genin Arc:

He tied his headband across his head as he promised to keep it warm. This day was a warm dreadfull day. The other day Moshi had met his teammates and his teacher. Moshi sat down on a soft warm hil as the Uchiha closed his eyes and enjoyed the sunset. BANG! A sound came from the right of him. Moshi turned around and say a man slamming a trashcan into a innocent girls face. "Hey you! Stop!" Moshi cried out. The man started running away. Moshi tripped down the hill and bumped into the woman who was just atacked. "Whats the problem miss?" MOshi said whezing. "Me and my boyfriend just broke up and he tried to kill me. He stole all my money and my panties" She said crying. "Uhhhhh.....A little much info but alright I'll capture him!" Moshi said and with that said he jumped down from the side of the sidewalk and ran across the open street as he saw the man eating out of a garabage can. Moshi took out a kunai and threw it at him. But the kunai only grazed his ear. "Damn I missed!" Moshi said as the man got so pissed he picked up the kunai and ran for Moshi. Moshi then jumped back and summoned a clone of himself. Moshi ran away as the man slammed the kunai into the clones neck. BOOM! The side of the village exploded and it was all Moshi's fault. Then a pair of panties fell ontop of him. And then a purse slammed into his rib cage. Moshi ran over to the woman and gave her the stuff that was stolen from her. Moshi returned home and had a good nights sleep.


The last few weeks Moshi's been training like there's no tomorrow. He had used the Cursed Blade now and was very good with Kenjutsu. Moshi loved fire type jutsu and he would train most of them when he felt like it. Moshi then became more and more stronger. He surpassesed his teammates, his teacher, and even his parents. Moshi was really much much more powerfuller. But then last nightb he was robbed. The door broke and two grass rogue ninja's barged in. "GIVE US ALL THE FUCKING GOODS YOU GOT HONEY!" the ffirst rogue said. "AAAHHHHHH!!!!!" ShiShi said as she began to ran they used a type of jutsu that burned her to the core. "HONEY! NOOOO!" ANtho said running to her aid. "Please..Don't tell our son about this" ShiShi said as she passed out and died. Tears came down Antho's eyes. "SHISHI! SHISHI! COME BACK! SHISHI!" Antho said. But little did they know that Moshi was just around the corner. Tears came down his eyes. A lot. The loss of his mother was tragic. "NOW GIVE US THE MONEY OR YOUR NEXT!" the second rogue said. The first rogue raised his hand to Antho. "TImes out" he had said. Moshi barged into the situation and cut off the first rogue's arm. "DAMN YOU!" Moshi said. The first rogue blead to death quickly. "Fuck you asshole!" The second rogue said as he pulled out a sword. Moshi clanged his sword against his. "I won't forgive you guys!" Moshi said. Moshi then swung his sword across the second rogue's neck. The second rogue had died. "SHISHI!!!" Antho said letting out a big cry. "MOTHEERRR!" Moshi said. MOshi began to cry with his father. The next day there mother had a funeral. Thosands of Uchiha's were their and even some villagers. Everyone was crying even the adults. The baby's even let out a soft cry. The day was gull. Moshi was promoted CHunin from taking down the Jounin Rogue's. Moshi liked the fact he got promoted but didn't like the fact that he took down two rogue jounins.

Jounin Arc:

Today it was raining, today it was cold. Today no one was outside, today everyone was inside. This day was dull. Rain would pour over the land. But not like anyother rain. This rain was hard and heavy. Like a boulder crashing over your head. But for Moshi it was just an average day. There was a spy in the village. Who was an anbu. From an different village no one had expected. His plot was to assasin the head of the village, known as the hokage. Moshi had to deilver a messsage from his from his father to the hokage, Moshi climbeed up the stairs. It took a time. A mysterious anbu was at the door of the hokage. But he had a seal on him. His left arm perhaps. But Moshi thought it was a tattoo. "Hey mister nice tattoo" Moshi said. The anbu spun around and threw a kunai directly at Moshi. Moshi then triped down 2 stairs. "You want to fight jerk?" Moshi said. "EL Thor!" Moshi said as lightning spun around the Anbu and a giant flash appeared. Then the anbu was there on the floor with a gigantic opening under him. Then the tattoo spread around his body as he got up in a different state. His body was completely blue. But before he could move another shinobi came out of under the hole and choped the anbu in half. "You did good kid" the Shinobi said. Tomomrow I'll give you a good word with our master! You'll be a jounin for sure!" And with that the next day rose up. Moshi was promoted to a Jounin. Moshi would train everyday afterwards. He would learn more moves and explore new places. Moshi would soon discover the power of the Sharingan. But for now he would stick to his regular training. Moshi had many talents.

RP Sample:

Twenty Years ago....Before Zarath was born.... Deep within the east blue...A massacare was at play. Countless of lost souls were killed and injured. Only Eighty Percent died. The other Twenty-Percent were all Devil Fruit eaters. How did this fight start extually? It was all thanks to the father of "Full Heat" Zarath. His name was Rathor. But he would go bye, "Devil's eye". Devil's eye wasn't you average pirate. He was a devil fruit eater. Along side his crew, he was certain to bring Peace to the world. But he would have to len his mission to someone else.

Rathor weared a Black Gi and a cape behind him. He would celebrate with his crew at bar shops and spar with friends. But on one day, Three Bounty Hunters had arrived at the bar. " Hello how can I help you?" The Cashier said. " I would like some fresh beer " The first man said. The man gave a 10 berries to the Cashier. " Thank you asshole" He said as he left. " Fucking Bitch " The Cashier said. The second man came up to the Chashier, " Hey baby kick me in the balls and give me some beer, Because I'm gay and I need to get back to the Strip Club . You know what I mean?". " Oh yeah!" The Cashier said. After getting a free beer for the man he had left. The thrid one came up holding a knife. " Ok asshole, give me all the bitches and the beer. I'm having a Strickclub party and I don't want you to fuck it!" The thrid one said. " You mad Bro? " The Cashier said. " Fuck you!" The thrid one said raising his blade. Rathor responded before he could hurt anyone. Rathor cut threw the Man's shirt through the heart.

"What the-" The thrid said falling to his death. "Well...Well..." Rathor said. The boss bounty hunter came his name was "Uraka Oisa". "What the fuck did you do!" Uraka said. " Shut the fuck up and get the fuck out " Rathor said. " Well well well....Isn't it Rathor..the Devils eye...The man that's raised for 1,000,000 berries. Dead or Alive. " Uraka said. " Hmp, so they raised it to 1,000,000...Figures.." Rathor said. "I'm going to fuck you really hard" Uraka said. " Rapist..." Rathor said. " I told you he was a rapist!" a Random girl said. " Grr..." Uraka said. Uraka took out a gun and shot it at Rathors head. Rathor rapidly used his sword to repel it. " Gummy Bears " Rathor said. " huh-?" Uraka said. Rathor cut through his armour and sliced the figure in half. " Gummy Bears.... Are my favorite snack of the day!" Rathor said. Rathor say that there was a Marine ship right outside of the islands curve. Rathor rushed out of the bar out into the open. 10 cannon balls shot at him at once. Rathor appeared on top one of them knocking it into anotherone that hit the ship. Rathor hoped into the ship, The marine Soilders started firing there pistols. Rathor deflected every last one. Then he attacked them at once. Rather took out a lighter then threw it on to the ship.

The ship bustered with flames as it sank into the sea, Rathor escaped in a row boat. Leaving the island he waved good bye. He floated across the long sea. But, then a large shadow appeared behind his row boat. It was another Marine Ship. But with only one of them on it. "Arm Strong Lucks". Rathor remembered the name very well. He had various duels with him. Rathor ran across the ship on top of the Shit(Poop) deck. " So, lets settle that score!" Lucks said. heh, This time there's no one to interrupt...A fight to the death!" Rathor said. " After this I'll get so much berries I'll be rich!" Lucks said. Rathor took the first hit, he aimed for a hit at the legs then a Cut at the Rim of his face. Arm Strong blocked the first hit with his musclar leg. Then he dodged the second one with his cutting speed. Lucks upcutted Rathor in the stomach. "Shit!" Rathor said. Arm Strong kicked Rathor on to some bird poop(shit). "Is this all you got?" Arm Strong Lucks said. Rathor stood up trembling. "Rathor, If your the man who will guide the world then how will you do it? Your too weak!" Lucks said. " Because, If you look into darkness you won't find light. Fighting is the only way to guide your light out of the darkness. That means...That the only way to stop these fights is immortal peace. " Rathor said. Lucks kicked Rathor over the bird shit. "Goddamnit!" Rathor said. " If you will find this so called "immortal Peace" then how will it last? Hatred runs in the blood, even the sofest thing can have the worst hatred. Give it up. There is no "Peace". Everyone will keep fighting until there's one that stands on top of all! The pirate King!" Lucks said. " No...Your wrong.....Peace..Is not something that can be killed or drained. the light inside of your heart!" Rathor said smiling. Lucks was shocked. " The light in your heart that keeps you running! The god that speaks to every burden. The.... Kindness in every soul!" Rathor said. "THERE IS NO PEACE! FOOL!" Lucks said about to punch Rathor. Rathor sliced his arm off. Blood spranded from the arm ass it colored the bird poop(shit) red. " If you don't believe in peace! You don't believe in your heart!" Rathor said. Rathor stuck the sword through Lucks heart. " Rathor....Thank you...For now on..I will believe in peace...." Lucks said as he passed away smiling. Rathor then made anything possible for Peace.

~Twenty Years Later~

A young boy named Zarath was born. Zarath opened his eye's as his first thing to ever see appeared. When Zarath turned Three, his mother had passed away. Zarath lived in an apartment where he would stay for free. Zarath was hated against other parents. He was treated like a hobo and was shown no respect. Zarath was always down at times, but in the morning he would rise up. Zarath spended most hours at his apartment. But one day, those hours would be his worst. At the age of Six....

"I KNOW YOUR IN THERE DEMON!" Ula said banging on the door. Everyone in town called Zarath the "Demon Dragon". Zarath payed no intention to the door and tryed to sleep. Ula broke the door down with a axe and slowly walked bloodthristy to Zarath's bed. " I had enough of you! Everyone is saying your worth 10 berries. With that money I'll be able to rent a pistol! Now die!" Ula said. Zarath tripepd off his bed as it was axed down from Ula. " Come back runt!" Ula said. Zarath took out a knife from the drawer and cut the man on the arm. " Stay away!" Zarath protested. " Nah, Bitch!" Ula said about to chop at his feet. Zarath used the end of his shoe to block the hit then he twirled to the other side of the room. " Goddamnit... " Zarath whispered to himself. " DIE! " Ula said as a strange fruit dropped from his pocket. " What the- " Zarath said. Zarath's stomach roared like a tiger ready for dinner. " hehe....DIE!" Ula said abo to chop at Zarath's head.

Zarath ducked for cover as he had his mouth opened he bumped into the fruit. " DON'T EAT THAT! IT'S WORTH 10,000,000 BERRIES! " Ula shouted. But it was too late. Zarath's hunger striked as he glomped the fruit into his stomach. "aaah...." He sighed as he finshed every last bite. " GODAMNIT!" Ula said striking at Zarath's hand. But it was no effect. Zarath's magma devil fruit power's protested the strike. " Awesome!" Zarath said. Ula striked Zarath in the stomach as he fell down out cold. Ula picked the body as he dragged the body outside. he tied him with rope so he couldn't move.

As Zarath woke up there was burning fire surondding him. Then stood ever single parent in the village. " As promised, Captain GayDick! " Ula said represnting Zarath rope tied. "Goddamnit..." Zarath said. " Are you sure he's a devil fruit eater? " Gay Dick Said. " Are you sure your mama named you right? " Zarath responded. " HAHAHAHAHAHA" The parents cried out loud. GayDick got pissed off as he raised a sledgehammer tied to where his hand use to be. " Die! " GayDick said. gaydick slammed Zarath three times messing up his face. "F-F-Fuck it...." Zarath said trying to be let free.

"It's useless" GayDick said. " Says for you....Gay....Dick..." Zarath said. What a gay name!". "IT STANDS FOR HAPPY MOBY IDIOT!" GayDick shouted. " That's what she said!" Zarath said smiling. "Goddamnit!" GayDick said. Every parent let out a laughter of cries. GayDick slammed Zarath repeaditly. Over and Over. Blood spranded into the air. The parents got worried. Even Ula peed his pants that leaked into his ass as, wet poop plopped out. Bam! Boom! Bam! Over and over Zarath was cutted and wounded. " He is no devil fruit eater....HE'S JUST A PUNK!" Gay dick said as he punched Zarath out of the rope breaking the log.

Zarath full of anger begain turning himself into Magma...."Inugami Guren" he said as a dog shaped dragon bursted out of his hand. Followed up by 2 other dragons. They all completely ate GayDick Followed up by Ula. As they had both died, Zarath fainted. Early in the morning he woke up at the hospital.."uhh what happened.." Zarath said. " You were out cold from that big battle " The nurse said. " Big battle? More like me getting beat up...." Zarath said. " Some parents said that you were a "devil Fruit Eater" " The nurse said. " There right...That fruit..... " Zarath said. " The good thing is that all your wounds healed " The nurse said. Zarath walked off the bed. " Where ya going? " The nurse said. " To the mountains...I'm gonig to become a pirate...But first to train! " Zarath said as he left thw village for 10 years of training.At the age of 15 he would return.

~Ten Years later~

After ten years of training, he returned knowing more skills of his powers. Zarath returned to his sweet loved village. But 3 days ago the village had been attacked. A fleet of pirates had came to the village to steal the treasure of everything. Zarath's first warning was a group of ten men attacking him. "GET HIM!" THEY CRIED! "Ryusei Kazan" Zarath said as More then 1000 magma attacks hit the men. When they crashed onto the floor, Zarath wondred what they were up to. He picked one of the bitches. " What are you doing here? : Zarath said. " Pirate...Fleet...Attacking...Village...." The pirate said. " ugh..." Zarath said. Zarath threw the man away as he started running to the ship near by. More then 1000 men rained down. "Inugami Guren!!" Zarath said as 10 dragons came out of his body raining down as they ate the pirates. " Don't understimate me! " Zarath said. After the dog shaped dragons was finshed, Zarath moved aboared the ship. "What the-" Zarath said.

" My name is Arm Strong Lucks Jr! " A kid one year younger than Zarath said. I have come here to seek revenge!" "Revenge for what?" Zarath said. "The mans's son of who killed my father, of course" Lucks Jr said. "What's his name?" Zarath said. " Rathor...And I heard his name was Zarath. Also, I've heard his bounty is 100,000!" Lucks Jr said. "Your looking at him!" Zarath said getting prepared for a fight. " Very well..." Lucks Jr said. Lucks took out his golden Ave sword. " This will be a fight to the death! " Lucks Jr said. " What ever " Zarath said. Magma Fist!". Lucks Jr used his Golden Ave to block the attackc and send Zarath back flying. " Is that all? " Lucks Jr said. " Nope, There's more where that came from! " Zarath said. Dai Funka!". Lucks Jr raised his sword deflecting that attack. "Goddamnit!" Zarath said as he was lipped over and crashed into the deck of the ship. "I can't stop fighting!" Zarath said. " Your right...Are you really the man of Rathor. Your to weak! Your suppose to be the son of the man that will bring peace to the world!? What a chump your father was..." Lucks Jr said. "No....He wasn't a chump....No matter what happens...If you look into darkness you won't find light. Fighting is the only way to guide your light out of the darkness. That means...That the only way to stop these fights is immortal peace." Zarath said.

"Ryusei Kazan!!" Zarath said shooting multi magma fist's at Lucks Jr. Lucks Jr was beaten down by the attack caught off gaurd. "I-Imortal peace you say? If you will find this so called "immortal Peace" then how will it last? Hatred runs in the blood, even the sofest thing can have the worst hatred. Give it up. There is no "Peace". Everyone will keep fighting until there's one that stands on top of all! The pirate King!" Lucks Jr said lying on the floor. "No...Your wrong.....Peace..Is not something that can be killed or drained. the light inside of your heart!" Zarath said about to punch Lucks Jr. Lucks Jr dodged the attacking rolling around then picked up his sword, noticing that his ship was runied. "IF THERE IS THIS PEACE IN MY HEART! THEN RIP IT TO SHREADS!" Lucks Jr protesting. "FINE! MEIGO!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Zarath said as his hand turned into molten rock attacking Lucks Jr at his heart. Zarath appeared next to Lucks Jr. "The light in your heart that keeps you running! The god that speaks to every burden. The.... Kindness in every soul!" Zarath said protesting Lucks Jr's opinion. "Damnit...Don't you get it...You idiot! THERE IS NO PEACE!" Lucks Jr shouting as he slashed at Zarath's hand, Zarath withdraed his hand sending him backwards in a slow motion. " YES THERE IS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! " Zarath shouting. INUGAMI GUREN!". A dog shaped dragon came out from his hand as it bite lucks jr taking him up into the sky. " If you don't believe in peace! You don't believe in your heart! " Zarath shouted. " Goddamnit...Just finsh it! Let me leave this world...But Zarath...We will meet aga-" Lucks jr said as his body was crushed from the dragon. " Phew....." Zarath said. Zarath slowly crawled off the ship onto the shoreline. From his energy drained he began to fall onto the floor, "Don't worry i got you" His nurse from 10 years ago said. So even the might Zarath faints from blood loss? Why do you believe in Immortal Peace so much?". Zarath responded, " Because that's what I believe in! And someday I'll find my father! Lets bet on it!". The nurse gave him a sealing sword. She showed him how to use it and activate it with his Devil Fruit powers.

And along that day Zarath has sworn to protect anyone in danger. Two years of training and Zarath has improved more then ever. Zarath left the island hoping to come back. He left on a row boat out into the sea. Zarath would find a crew sometime, but now he was just chilling with the ocean. He remember's the good times with his mother. Zarath started crying just thinking of her. But Zarath....Was now a pirate. Later when he was 17 years old, he smilied looking into thesky picturing GUMMY BEARS!


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