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Vento Tranquilla [DONE]

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Post by Vikus on Fri Dec 09, 2011 2:32 am


Name: Vento Tranquilla
Nickname/Alias: Creed
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Looks:

Vento is of italian descent, and so his skin tone matches this. However, he is still fair-skinned, and is not very dark nor does he tan well. However, it's still enough to make his race noticeable. His complexion is clear and clean, and his eyes are a mixture of green and hazel - a striking color that is sincere.

His hair is long and dark brown, reaching shoulder length easily. He has no facial hair, mostly because for some odd reason it does not grow for him. Perhaps it is a blessing, maybe not. His expression is often completely emotionless, rarely does he ever smile or show some kind of response through his face.

He wears a personally designed uniform, blue, white, and black with a red and black cape on his back. It can be viewed below in the image I provided for the sake of not having to write out a full description of it. Take off the brown straps across the chest as they are not part of it, and the outfit is just a tad bit more loose and open than it appears. The black swordbelt would hang across his shoulder and chest, his sword resting at his left hip.

He wears powder-steel gloves, which are fire resistant and allow him to carry slightly more than he normally would. They can also absorb shock, and allow him to grab blades without harming his hand, including his own blade if it was necessary. However, they are not immune to being impaled. They would provide a somewhat more powerful punch due to having steel powder in the knuckles, the momentum and blunt force combined.

His boots are fire-resistant, water and oil slip proof, and shock-absorbent. This gives him the ability to run across a wet ship without loosing his footing, or as he often practicing, the freerunning as he travels across the rooftops of a village or running wildly around obstacles and such. These boots also protect his feet against lightning attacks, such as how Guy's shoes were unaffected by Kakashi's Raikiri.

His body is finely toned due to his position and the freerunning that he does. He's in extremely good shape, and he looks decent. It's not that disgusting body builder body, but rather enough to show that he has a healthy lifestyle regardless of all the coffee and tea that he drinks on a regular basis.

Some defining elements of Vento outside of his general appearance are his keen eyesight, which has granted him the ability to not only notice a variety of things most people wouldn't even notice after days of being in a specific area, but also absolutely kills his OCD due to noticing every little thing that he could possibly fix, making him want to go around perfecting the place of all the crooks and nudges. He would even go as far as to fix something on his opponent's body while fighting them.

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Personality:

To begin assessing the personality of Vento, we can start by saying that he is a cold, dark, misunderstood void that is extremely difficult to comprehend. Let's start by going into his many personality disorders.

Starting with the most severe, SPD.

Schizoid personality disorder (SPD) is a personality disorder characterized by a lack of interest in social relationships, a tendency towards a solitary lifestyle, secretiveness, emotional coldness, and sometimes (sexual) apathy, with a simultaneous rich, elaborate, and exclusively internal fantasy world.

People with SPD are often perceived as aloof, cold, and indifferent, which causes interpersonal difficulty. Most individuals diagnosed with SPD have trouble establishing personal relationships or expressing their feelings in a meaningful way, and may remain passive in the face of unfavorable situations. Their communication with other people may be indifferent and concise at times. Because of their lack of meaningful communication with other people, those who are diagnosed with SPD are not able to develop accurate reflections of themselves with respect to how well they are getting along with others. Such reflections are important for a person's self awareness and ability to assess the impact of their own actions in social situations.

People with SPD "feel lost" without the people they are normally around because they require a sense of security and stability. However, when the patient's personal space is violated, they feel suffocated and feel the need to free themselves and be independent. People who have SPD tend to be happiest when they are in a relationship in which the partner places few emotional or intimate demands on them; it is not people as such that they want to avoid, but both negative and positive emotions, emotional intimacy, and self disclosure.

This means that it is possible for schizoid individuals to form relationships with others based on intellectual, physical, familial, occupational, or recreational activities as long as these modes of relating do not require or force the need for emotional intimacy, which the affected individual will reject.

Descriptions of the schizoid personality as "hidden" behind an outward appearance of emotional engagement have been recognized as far back as 1940 with Fairbairn's description of 'schizoid exhibitionism,' in which he remarked that the schizoid individual is able to express a great deal of feeling and to make what appear to be impressive social contacts while in reality giving nothing and losing nothing; because he is only "playing a part," his own personality is not involved. According to Fairbairn, "[the person] disowns the part which he is playing and thus the schizoid individual seeks to preserve his own personality intact and immune from compromise."

People with SPD are sometimes sexually apathetic, though they do not typically suffer from anorgasmia. Many schizoids have a healthy sex drive but some prefer to masturbate rather than deal with the social aspects of finding a sexual partner. Therefore, their need for sex may appear to be less than those who do not have SPD, as individuals with SPD prefer to remain alone and detached. When having sex, individuals with SPD often feel that their personal space is being violated, and they commonly feel that masturbation or sexual abstinence is preferable to the emotional closeness they must tolerate when having sex.

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We move on to the second personality disorder.

Paranoid personality disorder is a psychiatric diagnosis characterized by paranoia and a pervasive, long-standing suspiciousness and generalized mistrust of others. Paranoid individuals are eager observers. They think they are in danger and look for signs and threats of that danger, disregarding any facts. They tend to be guarded and suspicious and have quite constricted emotional lives. Their incapacity for meaningful emotional involvement and the general pattern of isolated withdrawal often lend a quality of schizoid isolation to their life experience.Simply put, people with this particular disorder have a tendency to bear grudges, suspiciousness, tendency to interpret others actions as hostile, persistent tendency to self-reference, and a tenacious sense of personal right.

Some symptoms of Paranoid listed:

Tendency to bear grudges persistently, i.e. refusal to forgive insults and injuries or slights.

Suspiciousness and a pervasive tendency to distort experience by misconstruing the neutral or friendly actions of others as hostile or contemptuous.

A combative and tenacious sense of personal rights out of keeping with the actual situation.

Recurrent suspicions, without justification, regarding sexual fidelity of spouse or sexual partner.

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On to the third.

Borderline Personality Disorder, which he has symptoms of, summarized here.

Individuals with BPD are often described, including by some mental health professionals, as deliberately manipulative or difficult, but analysis and findings generally trace behaviors to inner pain and turmoil, powerlessness and defensive reactions, or limited coping and communication skills.

Also, in a relationship if Vento were to ever achieve one, he would become extremely attached and have a intolerable fear of abandonment which can result in strong negative emotions as well as anger.

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Next, he has symptoms of OCD.
Being,
Feelings of excessive doubt and caution.
Control: Vento can be extremely manipulative and often finds a security in knowing that he is the puppet master above the curtain. It is a feeling of knowledge that brings his security as he knows everything that is going on at all times. He has the power to stop, create, and change any of it.

He also has a more cliche issue, which is a want for mior neatness. If something is crooked or sticking out he will go out of his way to fix it.
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He also has symptoms of the Passive-Aggressive Disorder, which include fear of intimacy as a means to act out anger: The passive–aggressive often cannot trust. Because of this, they guard themselves against becoming intimately attached to someone. As well as sulking.

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A note is that sometimes Vento speaks with Ambiguity, his words possibly having multiple meanings so that he can further manipulate those around him. Due to his extreme lack of trust and his need of control, he is an amazing manipulator and can often get to his goals without anyone knowing what his goals are in the first place. His speech skill would rival that of a rallyingg leader, rival that of Hitler even, able to take a nations troops while they were being given the prep speech. He is indeed a master of speechcraft in it's entirety. Whether he be speaking in command, philosophically, or gently, whatever way needed for the situation.

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A fantasy is a situation imagined by an individual or group that has no basis in reality but expresses certain desires or aims on the part of its creator. Fantasies sometimes involve situations which are impossible (such as the existence of magic powers) or highly unlikely; or they may be more realistic. Fantasies can also be sexual in nature. Another, more basic meaning of fantasy is something which is not real, or cannot be real.

In everyday life, individuals often find their thoughts pursue a series of fantasies concerning things they wish they could do or wish they had done...fantasies of omnipotent control or of sovereign choice or of sexual license...daydreams'.

Vento has many issues with fantasies as stated with his Schizoid Personality Disorder - living in one big internal fantasy in his life.

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That's just a quick look at the many personality disorders of Vento and how his daily life is as a person.

Vento has an extremely high level of Cognition, giving him the abilities listed within the article at a higher level than most. Able to comprehend and understand exceptionally well.

If you were ever able to reach Vento's heart, he is an extremely caring and protective person. But until those barriers are finally broken, he is as cold and enigmatic, as unemotionally charismatic as you could ever imagine. And remember this as well, that his heart is nothing short of a black hole. Once you are in, you can't escape, and if you betray him, you will suffer his wrath that he goes much out of his way to ensure.

A technique he has developed over the years of hiding himself is to be able to fit his personality to get along with people one-on-one, however he has difficult being social in groups where he has to attune himself to many people. He would rather be friends with everyone than enemies with one person, and would go out of his way to accomplish this. While he still does not care personally, it is more-so of establishing higher ground among his peers so that he has more in his control.

On top of it all, he can also be an excessively sadistic and morbid person, his mindset often too pessimistic on the world and certain subjects, and sometimes even himself.

He is a master liar.

Vento has spent a lot of time studying, and over his years when he wasn't doing work for the Kage or his own activities, he has became very knowledgeable on many subjects and is able to hold a conversation regarding most things.

In a final statement of his knowledge and ability, he has become a great user in the arts of stealth. Able to hide, eavesdrop, track his targets, and several other skills he has gained through much effort and practice.

Likes & Dislikes:

Likes Crimson, Silver, Teal, Rain, Stormy Skies, Coffee, Black Tea, Philosophy, Observations, Metaphors, Riddles, Proverbs, Questions, Tragedy, Sorrow, 'The End', Final Words, Seeing behind people's masks and learning their true values - especially in their final moments of life as they voice who they really were, Pens, Pears, He really likes pears, Pineapple, Strawberries, Strawberry-oriented things, Mint, Loves minty things, Soup, Gumbo, Bread, Bread, He fucking LOVES bread okay?, Bread with olive oil-pepper-& vinegar, A intellectual conversation, young girls.

Dislikes Yellow, gold, crucifixes, sunny days, clear skies, orange juice, pulp, extreme heat, temperatures above 70 degrees Fahrenheit


Catch Phrase:

il mio comedia ha iniziata. "My comedy has begun."
il mio comedia ha finite. "My comedy has finished."
le comedia ha finite. "The comedy is finished."
il tuo comedia ha finite. "Your comedy is finished."

le finale comedia, capitolo uno. "The final comedy, chapter one."
le finale comedia, capitolo due. "The final comedy, chapter two."
le finale comedia, capitolo tre. "The final comedy, chapter three."
le finale comedia, capitolo quattro. "The final comedy, chapter four."
le finale comedia, le finite capitolo. "The final comedy, the finished chapter."




Village: Suna
Village Rank: ANBU
Skill Rank: A




Skill Specialty:
Main: Kenjutsu
Sub: Ninjutsu
Sub: Taijutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Lightning
Sub: Wind
Bijuu: Sand

Special Characteristics: He is naturally an extremely fast person, like Minato Namikaze, agile without the help of elements.
Flaws/Weaknesses: He has a soft spot for little girls, as well as his OCD and various personality issues killing him most of the time.




Name: le Comedia (The Comedy)
Appearance:

This is a fine tempered steel longsword that belongs to Vento. It is his personal weapon, though it holds only two special characteristics. The first being it's ability, listed below, and it's extreme durability and near impossibility to be destroyed (like the kusanagi.) The pommel is a diamond shape, while the hilt is wrapped tightly in black linen for a firm grip. The guard has a black finish for visual effect. It has a spear-point tip, and a kaki-toshi blood groove. As well as a polished steel scabbard, accompanied with a chape and drag for extra protection for the sword. He has a black leather sword belt that goes around his chest, keeping the blade held at his waist on the left hip.

Rank: A
Special Abilities: It has a constant effect of http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Vacuum_Sword that costs no chakra.
Origin: As stated in his father's journal log in the history, it was a gift to his son.


Name: (Name of jutsu)
Rank: (E,D,C,B,A,S)
Type: (Ninjutsu, Weaponry, Genjutsu, Kenjutsu, Taijutsu)
Element: (Lightning, Wind, Earth, Water, Fire)
Description: (About a paragraph describing your jutsu)

Canon

E-Ranks are automatic.

D-Rank
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release_Stream
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Feigning_Sleep_Technique
Kunai Knife Apparition (Page was deleted; summons a kunai knife.)
Giant Shuriken Apparition (Page was deleted; Fukasaku used it to summon a giant shuriken.)
Body Flicker Technique
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Leaf-Style_Willow
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Cloud-Style_Crescent_Moon_Beheading
Hell Viewing Technique


C-Rank
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Powerful_Wind_Wave
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Great_Breakthrough
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Violent_Wind_Palm
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Illusion_Flash_of_Lightning_Pillar
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Release:_Wave_of_Inspiration
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Thunder_Burn
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Sand_Binding_Coffin
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Sand_Bullet
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Sand_Clone
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Sand_Shuriken
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Third_Eye
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Crow_Clone_Technique

B-Rank
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Kunai_Blade
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Pressure_Damage
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Release:_False_Darkness
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Infinite_Sand_Cloud_Great_Breakthrough
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Vacuum_Wave
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Destruction
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Release:_Electromagnetic_Murder
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Shadow_Clone_Technique
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Sand_Sensing
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Sand_Waterfall_Funeral

A-Rank
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Blade_of_Wind
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Drilling_Air_Bullet
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Release_Shadow_Clone
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Wind_Release:_Vacuum_Serial_Waves
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Quicksand_Waterfall_Flow
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Sand_Waterfall_Imperial_Funeral
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Iai_Beheading
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Clone_Great_Explosion
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Hiding_with_Camouflage_Technique


S-Rank (3)
http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Ultimately_Hard_Absolute_Attack:_Spear_of_Shukaku






History:

le Comedia ha finite.

And so we finally sit ourselves down at the proverbial bench. Take off those shoes and step into mine, take off those glasses and see through my eyes. Yes, it seems that fate has finally come to me, so now I must finish my research the way I had intended. There is so much more to learn, I wish I could have been around just a tad longer. I am so close - but it seems maybe I am the truth behind it all. To be the gatherer of death, and now as the city falls, to have it come to my doorstep. Yes, I believe acceptance is the only necessary measure to take here. I have left my door unlocked - why make destiny wait? That blade coming for my fair flesh. The taste of coming death is intoxicating - I dare say that it is not from the fine mead produced by the citizens of this city. No, my tolerance has quite leveled - it would take a brewery to sweep me off of this pedestal.

I have come to my final moments, for now after all my years of collecting the end, I am finally faced with it. Perhaps it is not that I have stopped my quest to continue gathering the end, it is that the final end I must gather is my own. Yes, it's not so much that I must accept defeat, but rather I must make it meaningful in what ways I can. What are my values? Like all those people, surely I need a purpose as well. Perhaps I do not need one, but I do not necessarily want one either. No, I simply must create one to carry on my legacy. The history books may be burned - the brains of the citizens scattered among the gravel - but time cannot be erased. Even if the world does not remember me, I will still have made my mark. I am here physically for the taking, but they will not capture my essence. No, I am something quite immortal. But that makes me feel like a narcissist, and I don't love myself that much to be a self-proclaimed immortal. No, I shall finish my legacy with something that is beyond life.

These words, I find it silly. Writing on parchment because I know that a voice is but a whisper in this world of wind. With every gust and gale a story disappears, but with this crimson ink it may last forever. Copied and retold, preserved. I already hear the screaming of these people, what have they left? I have already captured so many in my journal - to know the words of a dying man. I faced death with values and meaning. My study to know what man truly considers important. So far, his family, himself, his goals, his failures, his successes. It's all a different story depending on who is dying in my arms. I gave them a chance at lasting just a while longer than they did before, and I am glad that they accepted my makeshift salvation.

Now I must face the reality. I have come to accept the many disorders that have plagued me in my lifetime, I thought that at some point they would have prevented me from enjoying the world. But no, in fact, they have made me see it ever clearer. I have seen the darkness in blinding light, and the blinding light behind a lens that shuts out the lies. I have succeeded in my temporary presence, and I know that I have at least one person that will thank me for it. To think I would pass on these genes - just one more monster in this world. But no, not a monster, a philosopher. A seer, a man who will find even more meaning than I in the death that will soon surround him. This war is such a joke, this life is such a joke. But it is not the joke that makes the comedy - it is the comedy that makes the joke. And with a comedian, you control the comedy - the comedy is a life, and the life is a story that is shaped depending on the persons actions in their life. So in truth, we are all just a joke - and I suppose I should be laughing. That seems to be a suitable expression for this very situation. I think I'll take it to heart.

Well, look at me rambling. It seems I have wasted what moments I had left in my lifetime, my presence, my fading. I wonder if there really was a gate in the sky, because I've sent one too many people to it. I wonder if they accept my research in their fantasy. I wonder if they can see the good I have brought to this world. But I highly doubt it, as my good was brought as selfish actions with selfless intentions. But it is not intentions that ultimately decide where you go in the end, no, it is the actions those intentions shaped.

We will all die a fading memory. No hero, no legend, no story, no god will surpass the test of time. For who will carry on the tale when nobody is left to tell it?

Would you look at that, the door is breaking. I suppose it is time I delivered this journal to my wife, she is waiting on the ship. This pen, and my sword - le Comedia. May it end these bad jokes one more time before it reaches a resting place. A hibernation before another proper use. Oh, and my pocketwatch. Yes, my son will take value in it I'm sure.

I was going to save it for myself, but I know that no matter how hard I try I cannot live forever. These sands will take me in their desperate hold.

il mio comedia ha finite.
Tempesta Tranquilla

RP Sample:

The river rapids rushed violently as the long stretch of water descended into infinity, the great falls in which the river was made unending marked the border of the Land of Fire. Leaves and grass strayed down silently from the tall cliffs in which the wind blew them into the water. Towards the great falls, the water was more peaceful, and easily walked upon with the chakra gift of buoyancy. On the sides of the grand falls, two statues had been erected from the first great ninja war, the battle between Madara Uchiha and Hashirama Senju. In the end, Madara had lost, but he was still alive to this very day. Hashirama was long dead, and in the past, had been used as a summoning for Orochimaru's failed assault against the Hidden Leaf. Now things were much more different, Madara had surpassed his previous power by very much.

Upon the infinite river, the horizon, the beginning of what would be made out by the naked eye, a figure could be seen walking forward. At first, just a gray shadow, matching the fog in which rose from the rapids. As it approached more and more, the figure started to become clear in vision. From the water, blue chakra glowed, under black sandals on white socked feet. Upon the legs of this figure, navy pants extended to a waist, and above these was a black short sleeved shirt with the Uchiha trademark symbol upon its back. The fan of the clan, the symbol of fire in which was their greatest element. Around all of this, a black cloak with red clouds scattered upon it promiscuously, the grand logo of the Akatsuki. Atop it all, a straw hat, with white paper strips hanging from it to conceal the facial appearance to the public. Inside these strips, two red eyes stared forward with murderous intent. On these red eyes, three tomoe danced upon the iris moving slowly in an orbit around the pupil. However, deep in the pupil, inside the mind a loving and caring person could be seen. Hidden by the exterior shell of a dark personality.

This figure was none other than Itachi Uchiha, the second living survivor of the Uchiha Clan, and one of its murderers which brought it nearly to an end. All had been killed except for Madara Uchiha, the helper of the murder, and Sasuke Uchiha, the one brother who had been pitied upon. That had changed as well, as Itachi now had the Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan. It was yet to be revealed to any foe, as he was saving it for just the right moment.

Wrapped in his arms, he carried a smaller figure. What could now be seen as he had approached more to the area, was a very young girl. No older than seven, she was no more than three feet tall. The small girl had her exposed arms wrapped around him in an embrace as she laid in his hold. She was wearing a black shirt, with no sleeves, but decently sized straps over her shoulders as not to be revealing. She also had long, black silky pants on, with an elastic waistband which fitted her well. Her black hair fell down to her waist, or rather down to Itachi's stomach due to her position. She blinked once before closing her eyes, they had no pupil, indicating she was of Hyuuga descent. Her best technique was the byakugan, yet she had barely any training in the actual taijutsu of the Hyuuga family. To those that would recognize her, she was Hanabi Hyuuga. The youngest of the family, and the most innocent, being the weakest, even of her sister who was an utter failure. Itachi had taken her, and protected her. However, his true intentions were yet to happen.

Itachi could sense the massive chakra reserves of Kabuto and Madara from the distance they now had, possibly only a mile away from each other, both now in the Final Valley. Due to feeling the presence before, Itachi knew immediately that it was Madara, and Kabuto was now in visual sight. Itachi stopped his movement forward, and stood quietly. His arms shifted just a little.

Itachi "Hanabi.. We're here."

She shifted slightly in his arms, the young girl was half-asleep, warm and comfortable in his hold, the cloak providing enough warmth for the both of them in the cold river. Hanabi mumbled slightly.

Hanabi "Already, Onii-san? But I'm sleepy..."

Itachi nodded down to her even though she wasn't opening her eyes. He would have to take her somewhere before the fight would start if it did, her protection was one of his main priorities. Looking forward, he waited for the confrontation to begin. It was only a matter of time now until something happened.

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Re: Vento Tranquilla [DONE]

Post by Cut♠ on Fri Dec 09, 2011 12:25 pm

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Special Characteristics: He is naturally an extremely fast person, like Minato Namikaze, agile without the help of elements.
Flaws/Weaknesses: He has a soft spot for little girls, as well as his OCD and various personality issues killing him most of the time.

Add more and better flaws. The be like the forth will make that a S-Rank SC. Your character is no where balanced.
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Re: Vento Tranquilla [DONE]

Post by Kai Terumi on Sat Dec 10, 2011 2:21 am

He is naturally an extremely fast person, like Minato Namikaze, agile without the help of elements.
Flaws/Weaknesses:
He has a soft spot for little girls, as well as his OCD and various
personality issues killing him most of the time.

Im not sure if ya want to edit your personality but your ocd and soft spot for girls etc isnt a flaw.

Also put a percentage of speed 30% being the highest faster than your rank
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