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Natsuki

Post by Natsuki on Mon Sep 12, 2011 1:53 am

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Name: Natsuki
Nickname/Alias: Natsu, The Tunnel Queen, The Great Traitor
Age: 40 (Looks around 20ish)
Gender: Female
Looks: Though appearing as naturally beautiful young woman, Natsuki greatly alters her appearance with heavy piercings and her considered dyed orange hair. Though despite all of her piercings, none can really deny the fact that Natsuki is actually a very beautiful woman, her beauty shining past all. In addition, her considerably short size (5'0) actually gives her a more cute appearance if anything, her hair tied up in a strange sort of bun and her skin is as fair as ivory.

Her attire is simple, as she wears the same clothing as Akatsuki members, as a more of a standpoint rather than support for the empire. Underneath belies a sleeveless dress, which shows an partial bit of her sides. Her Akatsuki cloak is very similar to those used by the original Akatsuki members, those that originated from the Village Hidden in the Rain.

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Personality: Natsuki at first glance is a quiet, somewhat distant woman, not allowing anyone to get too close to her, almost to the point of being anti-social. However, those who actually know Natsuki as a person know that she is in fact a kind and caring person, thinking of those important to her personally and the people of her village. Her conviction is genuine, wishing nothing more than the safety and good quality of life for her village, and willing to face down any opponent who would dare to attempt to harm her friends.

Natsuki is one to think that even the most evil person deserves respect in life and in death, proven when she never says anything wrong or derogatory about her opponents, either dead or alive. Her respectful nature may seem like points made from someone with a moral high ground or higher status however, which causes some problems with certain individuals. In many cases, Natsuki will only resort to violence at the very last, willing to do most things besides starting a fight. It is because of this almost apathetic nature that one believes that she indeed has no true emotions, but merely a mechanical personality.

Even when being confident and solid in her own abilities, there are times when even Natsuki becomes doubtful of herself and her position as a leader. It is during those times where she periodically meditates, thinking things through to the finer points, and making key decision when the time calls for it. All in all, she is a fully capable leader who thinks things through.

Likes & Dislikes:
Likes
-Reading
-Studying and practicing ninjutsu
-Meditating in a calm and serene area
Dislikes
-Those who would harm her people
-Those who resort to violence to achieve their goals
-Those who oppress others to better themselves
Catch Phrase: "I wear this coat because I believe in the goal, but not the method that this new version has placed upon our world"




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Clan Name: Unknown
Kekkei Genkai: Rinnegan
Clan Symbol: Unknown
Clan Jutsu: Unknown
Clan History: Unknown




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Village: Doukutsugakure no Sato
Village Rank: Kage
Skill Rank: S




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Skill Specialty:
Main: Ninjutsu
Sub: Taijutsu


Elemental Affinity:
Main: Lightning, Wind, Fire, Earth, Water
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Stats:
Strength 50
Speed 100
Stamina 100
Chakra Limit 150
Chakra Control 50
Intelligence 100
TOTAL: 550




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Name: Chakra Disruption Blades
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Rank: S
Special Abilities: These blades can disrupt the chakra of its victim, capable of rendering them incapable of movement. The blades are very sharp, as they were able to pierce the skin of Sage Mode users. The blades themselves are hard enough to break scalpels though it is shown that they too can be broken with enough strength.
Origin: Special edged rods that protrude from a Rinnegan user's body



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History: To most who only know her by name, Natsuki is a mysterious woman of unknown origins and history, one placed well within the boundaries of the great calamity and wars, a small tale embedded deep within, one that is filled with pain, sorrow, hope, and divine fate.

Natsuki was born a sweet little girl, who had a family who loved her, neighbors who adored her and friends that she could play with anytime she wanted. It was a good little existence, encased within a small village, consisting of no more than a hundred members, enough to make a community but not enough to require anything important like currency or anything to that sort.

However, even that tiny village was soon plagued with the war that ravaged the rest of the land, soon forces of the 5 Great Shinobi Nations fought over the land that the village was contained in, being located in a great strategic point that allowed whichever to rule it to take over most of the land with certain procedures. Natsuki's world was brought crashing down, now instead of playing with her friends, she had to steal their things to survive, hide away so that her family wouldn't get caught in the crossfire.

Despite all of their efforts, it wasn't long before their home was burnt to the ground, forcing them to leave the home they once knew and move somewhere the wars didn't ravage so much. While travelling, it wasn't long before they were ambushed, Natsuki's parents both killed, and the little girl was left all alone, hidden away by her parents before their deaths.

From that point, Natsuki traveled the war torn land, learning how to survive with everything happening around her, scavenging for food, killing others to survive, making way with her self training. In her travels, Natsuki met various people who saw the pure potential she had within her, taking her under their wing, teaching her jutsu. Ironically, each of these men came from one of the 5 Great Shinobi Nations, each of them teaching her a specific styling of jutsu, not questioning why the girl was able to use all of the nature transformations.

The reason behind the nature transformation was in fact a result of her hidden Kekkei Genkai, the Rinnegan, the most powerful of all Dojutsu. Many people who knew the power believed that it wasn't the true Rinnegan, merely a mutation and an abnormal level of power, however there are many who believed in Natsuki's power, attempting to make her join their cause. Soon the Akatsuki caught wind of her and had her join the group.

It was not long however, until Natsuki met trouble with her own morality, the actions done far beyond what she considered reasonable. In an act of defiance, Natsuki removed herself from the Akatsuki, but continued to wear their cloaks, stating that she would work her own way to peace. To add to her cause, she traveled to Doukutsugakure to help and lead the people to her vision of peace, the people wishing to assist their new leader, their new Cave Queen. Since that point, Natsuki has improved Doukutsugakure to a force to preserve and maintain peace.

RP Sample:
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Natsuki traveled down the small tunnel that lead out of her village base in Dokutsugakure, the rocky walls channeling clean air into the chambers, going past filter after filter, to remove any attempts at poisoning the population. The young queen was plagued with thoughts and worries, thinking about the current situation that was befalling her people. The people may have it well off for now, but it was unsure when the Akatsuki Empire would ever attempt an attack on the village, through her best attempts, Natsuki has hidden the village from most attempts in suspicion, providing her people with food, water and shelter at the same time.

As her mind muddled over the thoughts, Natsuki reached the end of the tunnel, which revealed a canyon that stood high above a grand forest, the wind rustling through thousands of trees, a distant waterfall bringing clean, unpolluted water into a deep blue lake. On this ledge was a place where Natsuki could be at peace, where she spends her time thinking calmly away from all the troubles.

Natsuki sat on the rocky edge, her feet dangling aimlessly with nothing to grip upon. Natsuki leaned back, looking at the great sky and closed her eyes as she took a deep breath, absorbing the fresh clean air left untouched by all the corruption the rest of the world held. Natsuki smiled unconsciously to herself, thinking things through with a much calmer state of mind. Her spiraled eyes glanced to the side to notice the sunlight hitting the mist of the waterfall, creating several bright rainbows which added to the majesty of the entire scenery.

Despite the calm the scene brought, Natsuki's eyes filled with a fierce determination, one that would cause a person to wonder what has the Cave Queen so passionate. In her mind, Natsuki revitalized her desire to protect her village, and to preserve what is left of the world's beauty, before it was destroyed by the chaos and corruption that plagued the rest of the world.

Battle RP
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Natsuki laid herself out flat onto the grassy floor, completely hiding herself among the bushes as her eyes searched for her opponent. It was a healthy exercise for the Cave Queen to commit to, one that allowed her to hone and prevent her skills from dulling. In such situations, she restricted herself from using the power of the Six Paths, instead relying on other jutsu she had learned long ago before her Rinnegan awakened.

In the current exercise, all 4 participants are to use special tactics in order to draw out their opponents and obtain their sashes, which are easy target once placed out in the open. Natsuki scanned back and forth for any traces of her opponents, each a great shinobi in their own right, looking to see if they left anything behind. To her enjoyment, each of them laid a clever textbook trap, which would either lead up to the traps themselves, or make her think to avoid them by making them obvious. She was overall impressed by such careful planning, but there were always ways to counteract well placed traps, like calling their bluff.

"Katon: Haisekisho" Natsuki called out as she made the hand seals in rapid succession, taking in a deep breath and then exhaling a massive cloud of ash into the forest, she allowed the ash to creep into every which direction, the menacing black cloud was meant to draw out her opponents into the open, either they stand by their trap, or risk being roasted by the next effect of her jutsu. According to Natsuki's plan, two of the other five moved out into the open, causing them to stand in a triangle stand off with their queen. The tension in the air thickened as the ashes surrounded their clearing, the beads of sweat rolling down their faces as they waited for a movement from their ever calm queen. With a click of her teeth, Natsuki ignited the surrounding ash, causing a wall of pure explosive flame to surround them, leaving them no room for escape. At that exact moment, the two shinobi decided it would be best to attack Natsuki together, which she responded to with another set of hand seals, which allowed her to fire off bullets of wind into their general direction. The two moved to the side, enough to skim away from the attack, and manage to not get caught in the continuous explosion.

It was at that moment of weakness Natsuki began her assault, in a burst of speed she closed the distance to one of her opponents, removing his sash and flipping him over, while launching several kunai towards the other, removing his sash before he could regain his balance. In a short few seconds, both targets were disqualified and Natsuki remained untouched. Natsuki left them alone to search for the remaining member, who seemed to have eluded all attempts at attacks. Natsuki couldn't tell if he was in any which direction, absolutely no indication of his attacks, which only meant one place, below. With another set of hand signs, Natsuki rifted apart the earth under her, destroying her opponents attempts at attacking her, or so she thought. To her surprise, the jonin had predicted the technique, and used it as an opening to make a punch straight towards Natsuki's chin, the impact causing her to fly backwards and land perfectly on her feet. Luckily, Natsuki managed to move with the punch before the attack shook her brain, reducing the damage immensely.

Before anymore fighting could be done, Natsuki held her arms up in a yielding position, pulling off her sash and handing it to the ninja. She gave him a small smile, showing that she was happy with the result.

"You performed greatly, taking advantage of the opening in my attack, take this as proof that you bested your queen in this mock fight. If you work hard, you may prove to be a match for me even on the real battlefield. All of you performed well, each of you thought your plans through, any shinobi would recognize your skill. Rest well, you earned it" Natsuki said, giving her own subordinates a curt bow and turning around to walk back to Doukutsugakure, though she hadn't used her powers to their fullest, she had worked her soldiers to be able to best her in simple team combat.

The Cave Queen walked with a happy gait, proud that her shinobi had grown into such capable warriors, she had confidence that they would prove worthy in the battles yet to come.

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Re: Natsuki

Post by Natsuki on Wed Sep 14, 2011 1:53 am

Finished and ready for review

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Re: Natsuki

Post by Demonfist on Wed Sep 14, 2011 2:22 am

hmm.. looks pretty good, when was the rinnegan user able to weild all 5 nature elements??

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Post by Natsuki on Wed Sep 14, 2011 2:27 am

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The Rinnegan is characterised by a ripple-like pattern around the pupil, with a light purple iris and sclera. It is said to be the most powerful of Great Three Dōjutsu (大三瞳術, Daisan Dōjutsu; Literally meaning "Great Three Eye Techniques"). It was admired as being able to bring forth all ninjutsu. The holder of these eyes can completely master the six nature transformations that form the basis of ninjutsu. It was said that in times when the world is in disorder, a person is sent down from the heavens to become either a "God of Creation" who will calm the world, or a "Destroyer" who reduce everything to nothing.[1] It also allows the user to use all of the six paths techniques as well the seventh path - that is "beyond life and death".[2]

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The Rinnegan allows the user to use all the nature transformations (Only the basic 5 as far as I know).

And to add, I asked Hakai before I did it, and he said I could use all 5.

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Post by Demonfist on Wed Sep 14, 2011 2:37 am

Yeah it does give the ablity to master all six nature transformation,It doesn't give them all six off the bat. Six being Yin of course. You can learn all them, but you normally couldn't start off with them, you usually start off with three and learn the other two or three IC. But if Hakai already gave to the thumbs up then who am i to disagree with that lol... Even though the history and rp sample wasn't needed you added them anyway.... Nice..... Well thats the only real problem i seen. Since that was approved by an admin then your app is......



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Post by Hakai on Thu Sep 15, 2011 7:17 am

Yes I am allowing it but there will be some limitations. As 3 of the four you will only be able to use b rank. But that can be discussed when you put up jutsu. But I agree for now approved.

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