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Name: Kaira Rose

Nickname/Alias: Black Rose Of The Ocean
Age: 30
Gender: Female
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Kaira apearence looks like she is 24 years old when she is actually 30 years old, she is female in gender, her height is 1.5 meter in height, she weights 60 kilograms, her eyes are purple with red pupils, her hair is white/ light gray she has it untied and her hair is 5 metres in length.

Her skin is lightly tanned she is unscared aside from the tattoos she has her build is athletic, well curved, slight hourglass fiqure. Her outfits always change.



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Kaira was born into a family in the middle class. She was taught how to respect those who are older than her and to only fight when necessary. Kaira is not the type of person who starts arguments, but she is quite capable of ending one with just a few words. A flaw of hers would be that she jumps to conclusions. But most of the time, she normally keeps to herself and helps those who are in need. Kaira is very much like her mother in behavior, she is stubborn, independent and is very strong hearted and willed. Kaira will not allow anyone to walk over her or tell her what to do.



When Kaira is out in the public, she is observant and will make time to help those who are in need around her. She likes to spend time with the elderly as the stories that they come up with are always interesting. Kaira is afraid of growing old as she is quite self conscious; her appearance must always be at it's best. Kaira is the type of person who loves the attention, but she does not seek it. There is also a dark side to her as well, Kaira was brought up without friends except for her family. She is the only child and does become bitter when she is lonely, this is the reason why she loves the attention as she never got any when she was younger.



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She has a mix of tattoos on her body, these are often used when she is being pointed out to certain people as they are one of her most distinguishing features.

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Likes & Dislikes:

Likes
- Family - Swimming - Rain
- Sake - Training
- Katana's - Konoha
- Cooking - Smoking

Dislikes
- Meat - Paperwork
- Orders
- Council
- Sun


Catch Phrase: Lets play baby

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Clan Name: None
Kekkei Genkai: Enhanced Medical Vision



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Clan Abilties None
Clan Symbol: N/A
Clan Jutsu: None
Clan History: None












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Village: Sato
Village Rank: Engankage
Skill Rank: S



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Skill Specialty:
Main:Kenjutsu
Sub: Medical, Ninjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Lightning

Strength: 80


Speed: 80


Stamina: 90


Chakra Limit: 100

Chakra Control: 120

Itelligence: 80





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Normal Equipment

- Three Throwing Knives (Kunai)
- Three Shuriken
- One Medical Pill
- One Explosive Tag
- One Ninja Wire
- Medical Pouch
- Two Custom Katana
- Two Standard Katana
- One Custom Notepad
- One Custom Ring



Weapon.


Name: Blades Of The White Lotus.

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Rank: S

Special Abilities:



~Mixed Steel Casing~
The outer coating of steel on these blades is made with such a mix that it allows the swords to retain their sharpness and shape without regular maintenance, mixed with the Shi’gawa knowledge and care of a katana it has made these blades able to cut through most materials known through the Shinobi world.

~Light Weight Core~
Having studied the various materials around the shinobi world, Kaira has discovered the best choice for both strength and weight is not in fact steel, But the bone of the Kaguya. Seeking two bone Katanas from Rabbit, She shaved the bone down and coated it in metal to allow for a light weight and deadly core to her new blades.
Note this used to affect Crimson Fury, Feral Fury is the replacement for this.

~Sharpened Steel~
The special mix of steels combined by Kaira herself has meant these blades when sharpened stay sharp and rarely have to be sharpened again. This means the cut created by these blades are unique, able to often cut through some of the strongest defences and even ignoring some of the natural protection some people have.

Origin: Passed down by the clan


Name: Kairas Updated Notepad
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Rank: A
Special Abilities:

Medical Treatment Records~
Over the years Kaira has kept small records of nearly every medical procedure and event that she has ever done or been a witness to. This has led to a wide range of medical knowledge in almost every field being written in this small notebook for her reference later on, she has also written a more in depth series of books about her encounters which she keeps at home.

~Shinobi Encounter Records ~
Similar to the medical records kept within the notebook, Kaira has dedicated half of the notebook to shinobi she has encountered or fought against. This often lets her identify various people at a quick glance by the features and abilities she has written down within her notebook.

~Jutsu Performance Knowledge~
When a jutsu interests Kaira and it is of her element, she will often write down the details of the jutsu itself, she also tends to do this with her jutsu finding ways to increase the jutsus performance and the way she can use it. This often leads to her having a slight advantage when learning new jutsu or using jutsu she has already learnt.

Origin: had it since been a genin.



Name: Kairas Wedding Ring
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Rank: B
Special Abilities:

Chakra Storing Stones~
The stones that are inlayed within this gold and silver are far from what anyone would call normal, the user of this ring is able to slowly fill the stones with their own chakra and over time this will be retained and add to the store of chakra their body already has. Kaira saw the value in these and added a few extra stones to increase the amount of chakra she could have stored within the ring.

~Body Monitoring Stones~
These stones are similar to the chakra stones, more so in the fact they take the users chakra and store it but these stones have a different effect completely. The chakra stored within these stones is used to monitor the users body and apply medical treatment where it is needed on a slow basis. This does not help the body regenerate but in fact lets the body itself take more damage and seem to last slightly longer then it usually would.

Origin: Got it when she was married.


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Lightning Jutsu


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RP Sample: Ino was stood in the exam room waiting for the exam to start she could see that sakura standing with Sasuke on the far side of the room she wanted to show Sasuke that she was as smart as sakura and did not want to be behind her in these exams and wanted to show she was better.

Ino saw on the other side of the room an explosion of smoke that was the size of half the war then suddenly she heard a loud scary voice began to speak about the exams he introduced himself as Ibiki Morino he was a tall man, had scars on his face and was intimating to Ino she froze where she stood and did not move as he spoke he said he was the procter of the chunin exams and he told us that we had to hand in our paperwork and that we would be given an exam seat number, he then spoke somemore about the rules for the exam it self like no combat during exams without permission from the procter and he also said the use of fatal force was not allowed Ino tried her best to listen to the man but was scared of him as he spoke.

Ino handed in her paper work and was given a deck number she looked at it and saw it was not too far from where Sakura was sitting in the room it was directly behind her 3 rows back. Ino sat in her deck ready got her pencil out ready for the exam. “Right I am ready for the exam I cant lose to Sakura I need to do my best”. Just as she finished speaking the procter spoke again and explained the rules of the exam he expained that the exam works on a points system and expained that if you reach zero points you fail the exam along with your team and cheating will result in the loss of two points from your score.


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Post by Demonfist Sat Sep 10, 2011 4:18 pm

I'm not 100 percentage sure, but i believe the stat system is in play now, thats what was stated on Minato character app by hakai. It suppose to be placed right under the elemental info. So please go ahead and add that part. Haven't went over it throughly yet, butlooks good so far.
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Post by Demonfist Sun Sep 11, 2011 11:05 am

Ok another thing, i dont know if this a canon clan highly doubt it though even though i personnal see nothing wrong with the clan, however ithasnt been approved or even place in the section where it need to be looked at gor approval, im sorry to say this, but until thats done and approve. I cant approve your characther.
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made the clan in correct section first you should just go throught the clan on this app
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Post by Demonfist Sun Sep 11, 2011 2:27 pm

Ok finally got on my labtop to actually throughly look at your app over all a pretty good app. But of course being who i am and being able to finally check people apps. I'm a nit picker lol, so don't fuss me out to hard lol, but i found alot of problems{ well can't really say problems just things i didn't agree with to much} So by all means if i'm wrong somewhere in this just let me know and i will edited it accordingly unless i feel as though what you tell me still doesn't justify what you are trying to get approved. So with that being said...................... Here are my results or better yetmy findings on your app lol.










Jutsu Name – Doutjutsu Seal
Jutsu Type – Medical Sealing
Rank S
Description – The user uses their medical abilitys and knowledge to help seal the abilities of a Doujutsu away for a short period of time, Making them



This jutsu needs a post count on how long the user won't be able to use the dojutsu.



Raiton: Lightning Dragon Blast Technique
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: B
RP Description: Using this technique, the user creates a large dragon of yellow lightning energy, which they will use to cleave their enemies in half and burn them to a crisp



This is more of an A Rank Jutsu.



Chidori Senbon
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: S
Chakra Cost: 20
RP Description: A ranged electric needle, with the same power as Chidori.



Let me know if i'm wrong, but thought chidori and all its varation were banned?? if i'm incorrect then this is fine.



Chidori
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: A
RP Description: Chidori is an advanced Raiton Technique. It includes covering your hand in a thin layer of chakra, which soon expands to cover her hand in a large ball of pure electricity. This attack can be quite deadly, and is even said to be one of the strongest Raiton techniques



Same as before believe it to be banned.



Raiton: Lightning Devourer Technique
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: A
RP Description: Using their chakra to constantly manipulate the electrons in the air around him, the user is able to form a devastating offensive aura around him to fend off any opponents hoping to attack him
Special Note: User is immune to B Rank and Below Raiton Jutsu



Does this attack also stop taijutsu moves and other elemental Jutsu or just lightning??



Raiton: Lightning Tiger Missile
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: A
RP Description: This technique is also known as delayed tiger missile by its old name. It creates a tiger made out of glimmering yellow lightning that will rush across the distance to its target and pass right through it, no matter how fast it is



A little confused with this one, what does it actually do, does it attack the target?? or is it more of a genjutsu?? i ask this because it said it passes through a person and nothing else, so don't know if it is an actually attack or not.



Raiton: One-Thousand Heavenly Spears
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: S
RP Description: Using this advanced Raiton technique, the user makes it rain spear-shaped lightning bolts. The effect devastating to the area and surrounding wildlife



Even though most of your jutsu need to place some kind of range, i can over look them all but this one, whats the range of this attack seeing that it is an S rank attack i would say somewhere from around 50 to 60 meters around the general area, probably little less just guessing that really.



– Enhanced Medical Vision
Type – Surgical Alteration
Rank – S



This is more a KKG then anything else although i read how you came across to get them reguardless of it being an S rank, this gives you ablilies similar to both the hyuuga clan dojutsu and the uchiha clan dojutsu which allows you to see how the body works. Even though you can't see as good as the charka system as good as the hyuuga clan it does however rival what the uchiha clan can see. Even though you don't have the dojutsu skill of either the hyuuga or uchiha clan. This ablitlies is still to skill to be just a normal S- Rank jutsu. The fact that your eye's change for one color to another color put it in the dojutsu clan allow. I don't know maybe i'm looking to deep into it, But an admin will probably have to look at that.



Name - Eien no shīru (Seal Of The Ageless)

Type – Medical Sealing

Rank – S+



If i'm not mistaken this is simiar of f not the exact same kind of Jutsu tsunade has. This take a through amount of chakra and medical knowledge to have, I'm not sure how the stat system works or not but tsunade was a master medical ninja, if you were to place her in this current stat system her chakra control, and intelliance would be over 250 Placing her in the Leity class, i'm not saying that has to be the case with you, but aside from that you get alot of perks with this and not a real big side effect beside mental stablity, and this doesn't happen quickly this happens over time probably takes years before the effects would even start showing. This as well will prbably have to be looked at by an admin.



and looking at your strength and flaws, your strength out weigh your flaws, being a master swordsmen and a master of the medical arts, having genjutus as a weakness isn't all that great unless you can be caught in even the most basic genjutsu, which i doubt see that you are a kage. But still that will be fine, but a weakness saying that your scared of the cold, isn't really a ninja weakness so to say. Its not like if someone throws a snowball at you, your going to run an complete terror, or you won't go to an area where the climate is cold. So that's not really a weakness, so you will have to replace that with something else.
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Jutsu Name – Doutjutsu Seal
Jutsu Type – Medical Sealing
Rank S
Description – The user uses their medical abilitys and knowledge to help seal the abilities of a Doujutsu away for a short period of time, Making them



changed.



Raiton: Lightning Dragon Blast Technique
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: B
RP Description: Using this technique, the user creates a large dragon of yellow lightning energy, which they will use to cleave their enemies in half and burn them to a crisp



changed



Chidori Senbon
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: S
Chakra Cost: 20
RP Description: A ranged electric needle, with the same power as Chidori.



Its allowed asked cut before i started to make app.



Chidori
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: A
RP Description: Chidori is an advanced Raiton Technique. It includes covering your hand in a thin layer of chakra, which soon expands to cover her hand in a large ball of pure electricity. This attack can be quite deadly, and is even said to be one of the strongest Raiton techniques



Its allowed



Raiton: Lightning Devourer Technique
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: A
RP Description: Using their chakra to constantly manipulate the electrons in the air around him, the user is able to form a devastating offensive aura around him to fend off any opponents hoping to attack him
Special Note: User is immune to B Rank and Below Raiton Jutsu



changed



Raiton: Lightning Tiger Missile
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: A
RP Description: This technique is also known as delayed tiger missile by its old name. It creates a tiger made out of glimmering yellow lightning that will rush across the distance to its target and pass right through it, no matter how fast it is



I removed this tech


Raiton: One-Thousand Heavenly Spears
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: S
RP Description: Using this advanced Raiton technique, the user makes it rain spear-shaped lightning bolts. The effect devastating to the area and surrounding wildlife


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– Enhanced Medical Vision
Type – Surgical Alteration
Rank – S



In this most it is not meant to be used to attack people it is used for medical treatment



Name - Eien no shīru (Seal Of The Ageless)

Type – Medical Sealing

Rank – S+



added another side affect



and added another flaw
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Post by Demonfist Sun Sep 11, 2011 6:28 pm

On my phone so can do what i want to... Anyway everything else seems fine but still the flaws you added im sure u keep this seal activate for a long period of time ic if not all the time given me an estimated time when the flaws will take effecr and give me a flaw once it feactivated and it will be good to go
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Post by Demonfist Sun Sep 11, 2011 6:39 pm

Ok.... Ok.... everything else is fine so unless ad admin said different This app is......





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Post by Demonfist Tue Sep 13, 2011 10:32 am

Hmm... I see you have made that technique into a dojutsu huh.... Lol figure you would, its already been approved so i see no problems with it....



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