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Post by +Kaira Rose Kami(Snookie) on Tue Sep 06, 2011 6:47 pm

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Name: Kaira Rose

Nickname/Alias: Black Rose Of The Ocean
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Looks:



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Kaira apearence looks like she is 24 years old when she is actually 30 years old, she is female in gender, her height is 1.5 meter in height, she weights 60 kilograms, her eyes are purple with red pupils, her hair is white/ light gray she has it untied and her hair is 5 metres in length.

Her skin is lightly tanned she is unscared aside from the tattoos she has her build is athletic, well curved, slight hourglass fiqure. Her outfits always change.



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Kaira starting from the very top they would notice the mass of silky smooth white/gray hair that she usually would have tied into a pony tail, though when this is untied the hair would easily reach down to just above her rear. Her hair would also seem to form several natural bangs that hang over each side of her face past her eyes to give her a rather alluring look.

Kairas eyes are a soft blue in colour almost light enough to be white one would notice if they looked deep enough into her eyes themselves they would find soft specks of purple throughout the white orbs that seem to draw everyone and everything in.
Her nose is of average size and shape and holds nothing truly special about it, other then it leads down to the soft pink lips that always seem to carry a soft pout to them. Her lips are of normal size and seem to fit the femine face she has perfectly.
Moving further down one would come to the large chest she posses’, this is often the first place people tend to look and remember about Kaira as it is one of her most distinguishing features. Though many question whether or not her E cup breasts are fake or not, though she assures everyone they are. Her stomach is flat and rather firm to the touch and if she tenses her muscles enough one could make out slight muscle definition beneath the flawless skin.

If one is to look at Kaira from behind without a top on or if she is in a bikini they would see a very large tattoo of a phoenix with its wings spread in flame, this tattoo seems to take up the whole of her back and looks very lifelike one would swear the eyes of the phoenix follow them, she is often reserved in telling people the true meaning of the tattoo.

Her arms are the perfect length for her body, the tips of her fingers just reaching slightly below her crotch, one would notice that on the entire left arm she has a tattoo of a winding vine that starts on her hand and finishes on the top of her shoulder, along this vine thirty four blossomed flowers rest. On her right bicep there is a tattoo of a circle split into five sectors, each representing one of the main element affinities and in the middle a yin and yang symbol to show her affinity for medical jutsu, on her right forearm is the tattoo of a dragon with its head starting on the top of her hand the tail reaching to her elbow itself. Her fingernails are often shaped to have sharp points and are often painted a dark red colour.

Kairas rear would be firm with no to little signs of fat on it itself due to the amount of excercise she does, this is also one of the only areas on her body she has not yet tattooed as well as her crotch, neck, face or some of her legs.

Her legs are also in her opinion the best feature of her body, They are long, toned and curved in a way that completely compliments the rest of her body, they are also always void of and body hair itself and on her right inner thigh there would rest a tattoo of a black rose to symbolize her dark, violent yet caring nature. Her feet are rather small though not freakishly small and her nails always seem to be painted a different colour every week but her favourite colour is a deep dark red.

Kairas skin is always lightly tanned and her body seems to have no signs of tan lines at all, the skin itself is flawless other then the tattoos and is void of most body air aside from that on her had and her eye brows.





Personality:



Kaira was born into a family in the middle class. She was taught how to respect those who are older than her and to only fight when necessary. Kaira is not the type of person who starts arguments, but she is quite capable of ending one with just a few words. A flaw of hers would be that she jumps to conclusions. But most of the time, she normally keeps to herself and helps those who are in need. Kaira is very much like her mother in behavior, she is stubborn, independent and is very strong hearted and willed. Kaira will not allow anyone to walk over her or tell her what to do.



When Kaira is out in the public, she is observant and will make time to help those who are in need around her. She likes to spend time with the elderly as the stories that they come up with are always interesting. Kaira is afraid of growing old as she is quite self conscious; her appearance must always be at it's best. Kaira is the type of person who loves the attention, but she does not seek it. There is also a dark side to her as well, Kaira was brought up without friends except for her family. She is the only child and does become bitter when she is lonely, this is the reason why she loves the attention as she never got any when she was younger.



Tatoo's
She has a mix of tattoos on her body, these are often used when she is being pointed out to certain people as they are one of her most distinguishing features.

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Kairas Back Tattoo

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Kairas Left Arm Tattoo (The patern moves up and around her entire left arm, each flower is a known kill she has made)

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Kairas Right Arm Forearm Tattoo

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Kairas Inner Right Thigh Tattoo

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Likes & Dislikes:

Likes
- Family - Swimming - Rain
- Sake - Training
- Katana's - Konoha
- Cooking - Smoking

Dislikes
- Meat - Paperwork
- Orders
- Council
- Sun


Catch Phrase: Lets play baby

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Clan Name: None
Kekkei Genkai: Enhanced Medical Vision



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Name – Enhanced Medical Vision
Type – Surgical Alteration
Rp – Studying the many bloodlines around her for some years now and actually seeing the user many of these could have in the medical field, Kaira has been very carefully researching a way to alter her own eyes to hopefully try incorporate some of the features these blood lines posses.
The only true abilities she has tried to incorporate into her own eyes from the study of these bloodlines, is the ability to see within the human body at various levels to actually be able to see where a person may be injured internally so she can administer treatment directly to the area rather than waste her efforts on healing the entire body.
The other ability she has incorporated into this alteration of her eyes is the ability to roughly see a person’s chakra network, which would allow her to actually change her medical techniques to directly affect this rather then heal the body, allowing her to replenish another chakra at her own expense, though even with this sight it is not a perfect ability to see the chakra network so she is unable to strike at it like the Hyuuga, only able to heal it.
To achieve this alteration to her eyes, she would need someone with the ability to actually alter ones body without changing to much physically, so after going through the council and getting proper permission she has asked Layie to do such, giving Layie a strict medical guide to follow for the procedure as Kaira is sure that it will work.
After the medical alteration is complete, Kaira will be virtually blind for a few days as her eyes adjust to the new vision she is capable of attaining, which is why she must remain in hospital after the surgery is complete.
When the eyes are in use in this mode, they take on an almost mirror like silver appearance, people able to see their own reflections in such, this is to allow Kaira to select in which spectrum she wishes to see in whilst glancing into a body and to also select which level of ‘x-ray’ she wishes to use, whether it be a layer of clothes or deep within muscle. When not in use, her eyes would simply be as they normally are, though a bit more reflective than usual.

Pvp Abilities –

[b]Direct Treatment

Rp – The ability to look directly into either the users or another’s body greatly improves the ability to treat a wound, this reduces the amount of wasted chakra on all body healing by applying it directly to an internal or external wound by a small degree.

Body Invasion
Rp – Now able to see directly through both clothes and the body itself this lets Kaira now directly see any internal wounds or the extent of external wounds, this helps her grant the right treatment for injuries as well as monitor the body itself.


Chakra Sight
Rp – Being able to see into the body has also let Kai develop the technique further to be able to roughly see the chakra network moving through someone’s body and is now able to read their level of chakra as well as direct basic medical jutsu toward the network to restore it at a lower level, though she cannot strike at the chakra network like a Hyuuga.
Pvp – Can read Cp, Can use Medical and to heal cp instead of hp, though the target only gains half the amount healed. This cannot be used for 'scouting' purposes like the Hyuuga's Byakugan, nor is it able to see through illusions/clones like the byakugan

Passive Abilities –

Increased Body Knowledge
Rp – The ability to see now directly within the body and study both the bodies workings and the bodies chakra network has let Kai see some things in an active state rather than a deceased state she is used to studying bodies. This has slightly increased her knowledge of the bodies’ functions.

Clan Abilties None
Clan Symbol: N/A
Clan Jutsu: None
Clan History: None












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Village: Sato
Village Rank: Engankage
Skill Rank: S



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Skill Specialty:
Main:Kenjutsu
Sub: Medical, Ninjutsu

Elemental Affinity:
Main: Lightning

Strength: 80


Speed: 80


Stamina: 90


Chakra Limit: 100

Chakra Control: 120

Itelligence: 80





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Normal Equipment

- Three Throwing Knives (Kunai)
- Three Shuriken
- One Medical Pill
- One Explosive Tag
- One Ninja Wire
- Medical Pouch
- Two Custom Katana
- Two Standard Katana
- One Custom Notepad
- One Custom Ring



Weapon.


Name: Blades Of The White Lotus.

Appearance:
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Rank: S

Special Abilities:



~Mixed Steel Casing~
The outer coating of steel on these blades is made with such a mix that it allows the swords to retain their sharpness and shape without regular maintenance, mixed with the Shi’gawa knowledge and care of a katana it has made these blades able to cut through most materials known through the Shinobi world.

~Light Weight Core~
Having studied the various materials around the shinobi world, Kaira has discovered the best choice for both strength and weight is not in fact steel, But the bone of the Kaguya. Seeking two bone Katanas from Rabbit, She shaved the bone down and coated it in metal to allow for a light weight and deadly core to her new blades.
Note this used to affect Crimson Fury, Feral Fury is the replacement for this.

~Sharpened Steel~
The special mix of steels combined by Kaira herself has meant these blades when sharpened stay sharp and rarely have to be sharpened again. This means the cut created by these blades are unique, able to often cut through some of the strongest defences and even ignoring some of the natural protection some people have.

Origin: Passed down by the clan


Name: Kairas Updated Notepad
Appearance:
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Rank: A
Special Abilities:

Medical Treatment Records~
Over the years Kaira has kept small records of nearly every medical procedure and event that she has ever done or been a witness to. This has led to a wide range of medical knowledge in almost every field being written in this small notebook for her reference later on, she has also written a more in depth series of books about her encounters which she keeps at home.

~Shinobi Encounter Records ~
Similar to the medical records kept within the notebook, Kaira has dedicated half of the notebook to shinobi she has encountered or fought against. This often lets her identify various people at a quick glance by the features and abilities she has written down within her notebook.

~Jutsu Performance Knowledge~
When a jutsu interests Kaira and it is of her element, she will often write down the details of the jutsu itself, she also tends to do this with her jutsu finding ways to increase the jutsus performance and the way she can use it. This often leads to her having a slight advantage when learning new jutsu or using jutsu she has already learnt.

Origin: had it since been a genin.



Name: Kairas Wedding Ring
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Rank: B
Special Abilities:

Chakra Storing Stones~
The stones that are inlayed within this gold and silver are far from what anyone would call normal, the user of this ring is able to slowly fill the stones with their own chakra and over time this will be retained and add to the store of chakra their body already has. Kaira saw the value in these and added a few extra stones to increase the amount of chakra she could have stored within the ring.

~Body Monitoring Stones~
These stones are similar to the chakra stones, more so in the fact they take the users chakra and store it but these stones have a different effect completely. The chakra stored within these stones is used to monitor the users body and apply medical treatment where it is needed on a slow basis. This does not help the body regenerate but in fact lets the body itself take more damage and seem to last slightly longer then it usually would.

Origin: Got it when she was married.


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Kenjutsu Techniques
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~E Rank~



~D Rank~

Kaira Thrust
Rank: D
Type: Kenjutsu
Description: The user sends a quick thrust towards the enemy, going to stab them with the tip of the blade




Kaira Dodge
Rank: D
Type: Kenjutsu
Description: Due to greater training Kaira is able to dodge attacks with greater finesse'


Twin Slash
Jutsu Type
: Kenjutsu
Rank: D
Description: Two slashes instead of one!


Flickering Slash
Justsu Type: Kenjutsu
Rank D
Description: A blazingly quick attack that is difficult to predict.


Jutsu Name – Shi’gawa Parry
Jutsu Type – Kenjutsu
Rank - D
Description – The users speed allows them to not only block an attack against them, But to send it away from them leaving them unharmed.



~C Rank~




Kaira Backstab
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Description: The user appears behind the enemy in a blurring motion, sending his blade(s) into the back of his enemy, If caught off guard the enemy would be subject to a greater amount of damage.





Offensive Stance
Rank: C
Description: The user adopts a stance which make it easier to perfrom Kenjutsu attacks.


Defensive Stance
Rank: C
Description: The user adopts a stance which make it easier to defence against incoming attacks.


Counter Stance
Jutsu Type: Kenjutsu Stance
Rank: C
Description: The user adopts a stance which make it easier to counter incoming attacks.

Disarming Strike
Justsu Type: Kenjutsu
Rank C
Description: The user would make attack using the side of their weapon to force their target to drop any weapon they may be holding.

Flickering Defence
Justsu Type: Kenjutsu
Rank C
Cp: 5
Description: A blazingly quick defence that relies on speed to prevent an incoming physical attack.
to block Kenjutsu or Taijutsu.


Arch-Parry
Jutsu Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: C
Description: User surges chakra along their weapon and would either fan it in a circular motion against an attack, leaving the target of a close ranged attack wide open.


Jutsu Name - Lightning Disarm (Custom)
Jutsu Type - Kenjutsu
Rank – C
Requirements – Lightning Element
Description - The user channels a small amount of lightning chakra into a blade striking the weapon of there opponent, This small shock causes the opponent to drop their weapon.


Jutsu Name – Shi’gawa Crimson Blade
Jutsu Type – Kenjutsu
Rank – C
Description – The users blades glow a bright red, As the chakra within them becomes more refined.



~B Rank~



Kaira Cross Slash
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
Description: The user holds the two blades out infront of them, before slicing a single enemy in a cross shape, After the attack the user would spin the blades around and prepare for the enemy's assault.




Kaira Defense
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
Description: The user focus's a great amount of chakra into their hand's, forearms and blades before going to defend against an attack that fly's towards them, the chakra adding to their defense greatly




Kaira Arc Slash
Rank: B
Type: Kenjutsu
Description: The user holds the blades out to the side before they push forwards, slashing them across the area.. any enemy infront of the user would most likely be cut open by the fierce attack.



Dance Of The kage
Jutsu Type - Kenjutsu
Rank - B
Description - Often used as a ceremonial technique with events related to the Hokage, This technique if both beautiful and deadly to see, The user would seem to dance around their oponent, Striking with only the tip of their blade several times.

Diamond Cutter
Justsu Type: Kenjutsu
Rank B
Description: A powerful Kenjutsu attack created to cause a deep wound which would become a persistent source of pain for the target, unfortunatly due to the spercific targeting of this attack, it can be difficult to perform.


Severe Laceration / Forceful Blow
Jutsu Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: B
Description: Depending on the weapon in hand, the user would slash an artery on the opponent or fracture their bone due to blunt force trauma.


Riposte
Jutsu Type: Kenjutsu
Rank: B
Description: User sends a swift strike at an enemy target sometime during a block, that isnt noticeable until they realized they been hit - normally it is the gliding of a blade, or dislocation from a blunt counter-assault.

Falling Feathers (Custom)
Rank - B
The user jumps high in the air and spins around quickly tossing there blade(s) at there oponent, Before falling down and kicking off there oponent recovering there blades, Jumping back far enough to distance themselve from attack.



~A Rank~





Kaira Spin Slash
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Description: The User ducks down and unleashes a quick spin attack slashing those around him.


Cripple
Rank: A
Type: Kenjutsu
Description: The User's eyes would narrow looking over their opponent for any weakness in their defense, next the Kaira would go to slice down at the opponents weakness, be it a joint, or a muscle. The enemy would feel themselves grow weaker after the slash.




Dance Of The Midnight Rose (Custom)
Rank - A
Description - The users blades take on a purple glow as the excecute several beautiful dance manoveurs around there oponent, Stricking various points around the oponent body, Flowing chakra into the open wounds to shut the opponents body down.



Name – Blade Clone Technique
Type - Kenjutsu
Rank - A
Taking one or two extra weapons from their person, the user focuses chakra into these weapons causing them to take on the appearance as the user much like the Kage Bunshin technique, though the clones are more solid and actually strike with the same force the user could use the blade. When the clones are destroyed, the blades would fall to the ground and the user can recover these later on.

• May create either one or two blade clones.
• Custom weapons cannot be used for the clones, only basic weapons.
• When destroyed, weapons used can be reclaimed for use again taking their next turn.



~S Rank~





Kaira Multi Slice
Rank: S
Type: Kenjutsu
Description: The User spins their blades around, before dashing forwards appearing infront of the enemy in the blink of an eye, they then proceed to slash the enemy multipule times with the sharp blades.

Kaira Great Spin Slash


Rank: S
Type: Kenjutsu
Description: The User's body erupts with chakra, before they crouch down low holding their blade(s) out to the side, before they spin a single time.. unleashing a wave of chakra out in all directions. The wave would slam into all those foolish enough to come near Kaira.


Jutsu Name - Art of the Twisting Rose (Custom)
Jutsu Type - Kenjutsu
Rank - S
Description - The user gathers chakra through out there body and blades before they quickly execute the beautiful and quick dance of strikes, Dancing around there opponent striking in various locations before jumping above them and releasing the chakra downward toward them which takes on the form of a purplish hue.





Medical Jutsu
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Name – Medical Analysis
Type – Medical Jutsu
Rank – E-S
Rp – Utilising both their medical knowledge and skill with medical techniques, the user is able to focus chakra into their hand and determine the makeup of a poison, disease, cancer or the like, effectively finding out its ingredients, how it was made and how to best cure it with not harm to the patient.
Rp Effects – Able to analyse a patient, vial of poison, or what ever the user wishes using the required amount of chakra depending on the ailments rank to determine a cure.


First Aid
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Description: User treats a target using items from their medical pouch applying a small amount of chakra to the healing process.



~D-Rank~

Lesser Healing Jutsu
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Description: User treats a target using items from their medical pouch, applying a minor amount of chakra to the healing process.


Poison Cleansing Jutsu
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Description: User creates an incision on the target, then filters anti-bacterial liquid into the cut to draw out the poison while at the same time healing the damage.

Wound Extension
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: D
Description: User extends their hands out at an injured target focusing their chakra to expose their wounds.

~C-Rank~


Basic Setting Jutsu
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Description: User treats a target using items from their medical pouch, applying an average amount of chakra to the healing process.


Pressure Point Strike
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Description: User funnels chakra into their hands and aims to hit a major artery on the opponents body.


Prepared Needle Shot
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Description: User secretes body oils out of their finger's pores and applies it onto a weapon or shuriken, then motions to strike swiftly.


Mystical Palm Technique
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Description: User concentrates chakra into the center of the palm, releasing the energy over a target's wound or injecting it into their nervous system to place them in a state of slumber.


Pain Reliever
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Description: User would attain firm control over their electrical signals in preparation for an attack, that would heighten their reflexes or numb the pain.

~B-Rank~
Bone Mending Jutsu
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Description: User treats a target using items from their medical pouch, applying a large amount of chakra focusing on producing enhanced calcium to grow bone.


Chakra Scalpel Jutsu
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Description: User channels chakra into their hand thinning it into a blade that does not create external incisions but internal ones instead. Perfect for Surgery.


Dark Anesthesia
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Description: User soothes a target by staring into their eyes, while applying chakra on a pressure point along the arm placing them in a restful state of slumber.


Dead Soul Technique
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Description: User writes along a corpses forehead using their own blood similar to a summoning technique, then channels chakra into their brain to jump start the corpse as a zombie.


Oxygen Transfer
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Description: User performs CPR on a target and molds the chakra in their lungs to take in more oxygen while transferring it to the other.

Cherry Blossom Impact
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Description: User channels chakra into their arms and legs molding it to stimulate their muscles at incredible limits. They then release this charged energy on impact with destructive results.


Shadow Wound Preparation
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Description: User surrounds their body with chakra aimed at producing enough cells to sustain damage and numbing the pain as the wounds seal immediately after.

~A-Rank~

Poison Mist
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Description: User inhales a moderate amount of oxygen then corrupts their cells in the lungs into a dark-purple gas before releasing it at a target.

Important Body Points Disturbance
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Description: User channels chakra into their fingers and aim to send an invisible shockwave of electricity at a target's brain stem. This alters their nervous receptors making one body part move in place of the intended one.

Cerebral Shock Technique
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Description: User concentrates a highly focused amount of chakra into their palm and strikes from behind at a target's spine causing them to fall incapacitated.



Vestibular Disruption
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu

Rank: A
Description: User concentrates a highly focused amount of chakra into their palm and strikes at the side of the target's head with an open palm. Releasing the energy into the target's inner ear thusly upsetting their Vestibular System, causing their head to feel heavy and balance hindered.



Regeneration Enhancement
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Description: User channels chakra along their body healing their wounds and quickly begins to recycle this energy each time until it is gone.



Jutsu Name – Kiss Of Life
Jutsu Type – Contact Medical
Rank - A
Description – The sister to the Kiss of Death, This kiss has the power to heal its target or even bring them back from severe wounds or even unconsciousness. When used the users lips glow a soft white.


Jutsu Name – Kiss Of Death
Jutsu Type – Contact Medical Rank - A
Description – The sister to the Kiss of Life, This kiss has the power to wound its target, make existing wounds more painful or even knock its target out completely for a short period of time. When used the users lips glow a dark black.


Name – Body Destruction
Type – Medical Jutsu
Rank - A
Rp – Similar to the Important Body Points Disturbance in the fact it inhibits the targets combat abilities but at the same time unlike its sister technique it actually breaks down the targets body at the same time, this can sometimes leave a slightly permanent effect on its target for the remainder of the battle.



Jutsu Name – Dual Chakra Scalpel Technique
Jutsu Type – Medical Ninjutsu
Rank - A
Effect – Cannot be used in battle.
Rp Effect – This is a greater version of the Chakra Scalpel Technique, though this version is so difficult it cannot be used in battle at all, it allows the user to work much faster in surgery and work on different various parts in the body at once.



Manifestation of the Covenant
Type: Medical
Rank: A
Description: Layie unleashes, a massive torrent of healing energies, which heals up to 5 targets in the battle.



~S-Rank~


Greater Healing Jutsu
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Description: User treats a target using items from their medical pouch, applying a large amount of chakra into their heart massaging it with their chakra to produce a vast amount of new bloodcells as it is pumping - but if done incorrectly it can damage their heart instead.

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Five Point Palm Exploding Heart Technique
Jutsu Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Description: User uses their mastery over the human body's anatomy and channels chakra into their fingers striking 4 artery points along the human body and the final one a thrust of the palm at the heart. Simple taps are enough to inject a strong amount of chakra into these arteries causing them to pump extra blood into the heart as it closes. Once the effect ends, the target suffers from a heart attack as the heart valves open with a rush of blood enough to seep from their pores.


Jutsu Name – Chakra Transfer Technique
Jutsu Type – Medical Ninjutsu
Rank - S
Effect – Cannot be used in battle.
Rp Effect – The user is able to transfer chakra into their target to help them regain their chakra. This technique drains the user of their chakra to do so.
Rp Effect 2 – User gives their target their own chakra to replenish their targets chakra

Jutsu Name – Surgery Mode Technique
Jutsu Type – Medical Ninjutsu
Rank - S
Effect – Cannot be used in battle.
Effect – The user is able to enter a complicated surgery mode, thoroughly healing their targets wounds, though this mode often takes a lot out of the user and is only used in dire situations.


Jutsu Name – Doutjutsu Seal
Jutsu Type – Medical Sealing
Rank S
Description – The user uses their medical abilitys and knowledge to help seal the abilities of a Doujutsu away for a short period of time, Making them unable to be used for that time.3 posts in length.


None Element

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Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E rank
Description: This is a basic technique known to all Genin. Bunshin no Jutsu creates a clone of the user, which can used to create a diversion or cause confusion. Unlike Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Art of the Shadow Doppelganger), these clones aren't real, and thus cannot do any damage.






Jutsu Name – Kaira Dexterous Beauty
Jutsu Type – Passive
Rank – None
Description – Kaira intense training has formed their body into a well toned and proportioned look, Allowing them to hold this beauty with normal training routines. They also seem to appear younger then they usually are.



-Wall/Tree Walking
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: N/A
Description: The ability to use chakra to make your feet/hands stick to trees and walls so you can walk up them.
(Roleplay only.)

-Rope Escape Technique
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Description:: A basic jutsu taught at the Ninja academy. When a ninja is tied with rope, he can undo the knots and escape using this technique.
(Roleplay only)

-Cloak of Invisibility Technique

Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
Cp: -
Description:With this jutsu one uses a cloak or piece of cloth to make oneself blend in with the background, rendering oneself invisible.
(Roleplay only.)

-Water Walking
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: N/A
Description: The ability to use chakra to stand and walk on water.
(Roleplay only.)


~D Rank~

-Midnight Kiss (Custom)
Jutsu Type - Contact
Rank - D
Description - Channeling chakra threw there lips, The user kisses there oponent, The mix of chakra and chemicals putting them in a sleepy daze like state.



Body Flicker Tech
Jutsu Type - Ninjutsu
Rank - D
Description - This technique is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed.To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and the intended destination[You must be registered and logged in to see this image.]. Shisui Uchiha was feared as "Shisui of the Body Flicker" (瞬身のシスイ
, Shunshin no Shisui), likely referring to this technique.





~C Rank~



Servant Summoning
Type: kage Only
Rank: C
Description: The kage's assistant is ritually bound to the Kage, by means of summoning, and can be summoned to the kage at a moments whim, unable to refuse.



Nights Embrace (Custom)
Jutsu Type - Taijutsu Contact Gen

Rank - C
Rp - The user channels chakra into there hands, Giving them a soft purple glow to the tips of the fingers, Making them non hostile toward the user for a short period but still able to avoid incomming danger.


-Chakra Focus: Legs
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Description: Focuses chakra to your muscles allowing for a wider range of movement and dexterity.


-Chakra Focus: Hands
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
Description: The user charges their body with chakra, paying special attention to their hands. This allows them to breeze through jutsu and focus their attention on execution.





~B Rank~




-Special Chakra Boosting: Legs
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
Description: Focuses massive amounts of chakra to your muscles to make you light as air and super speedy.




~A Rank~




~S Rank~





Lightning Jutsu


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E Rank


Raiton: Static Electricity
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
RP Description: With a few basic hand signs the user is able to channel a thin jolt of electricity into an opponent, this can be done ranged or by touch



Raiton: Simple Shock
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: E
RP Description: With a few basic hand signs the user is able to channel a small shock that leaves their opponent vulnerable






D Rank


Raiton: Lightning Senbon
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
RP Description: The user focuses their chakra into a single finger after making a few hand signs and then shoots the lightning chakra from their finger. The projectile looks like a Senbon




Raiton: Static Wall
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
RP Description: Emitting chakra from their palms the user strikes out to block the opponent, the blocks are placed in a manner that the chakra from the palms fall into a barrier like wall


Raiton: Electric Jolt
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
RP Description: One of the most basic RaitonJjutsu that most Genin learn after discovering their element Deals a minor electric shock to their opponent, as they touch them




Raiton: Stun gun Technique
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
RP Description: The user fires a ray of shocking currents and must make a ranged attack against any living creature within 10 feet. The effect much like that of a taser.




Raiton: Cramp Technique
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: D
RP Description: The user sends the charge into one of the targets limbs, cramping it up and making it stiff as the electrical current messes with nerve signals






C Rank


Raiton: Thunder Crash
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
RP Description: The user would send a ball of deafening thunder, and electricity at the opponent. Possibly stunning and shocking them




Raiton: Electrical Discharge Technique
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
RP Description: The user releases a large blast of electrical energy after forming a list of five hand seals, monkey and rat being a few in the seal list, that attacks all nearby targets




Raiton: Minor Electric Current
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: C
RP Description: Through usage of this technique, the user is able to accelerate the flow of Chakra in their body, thus creating a small electric current that can be passed onto a hand-held weapon, or concentrated on a small part of the user's body to attack with






B Rank


Raiton: Thunder ball Jutsu
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
RP Description: The User forms a minor ball of thunder chakra in their hand throwing it at the target dealing a moderate amount of damage




Raiton: High Voltage Touch Technique
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
RP Description: Using this technique, the user focuses a large amount of Chakra in their hand and turns it to high-voltage electricity. The user makes a touch attack against one creature. This technique does not impede the user's hand




Raiton: Heavenly Lightning Cutter
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: B
RP Description: Upon completion of this technique, the user condenses their chakra into their hand and turns it into a long blade of lightning. Thus formed, the Kyuuten no Raikiri has the same characteristics as a katana, in which the user is automatically proficient.




A Rank


Chidori
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
RP Description: Chidori is an advanced Raiton Technique. It includes covering your hand in a thin layer of chakra, which soon expands to cover her hand in a large ball of pure electricity. This attack can be quite deadly, and is even said to be one of the strongest Raiton techniques




Raiton: Lightning Dragon Blast Technique
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: A
RP Description: Using this technique, the user creates a large dragon of yellow lightning energy, which they will use to cleave their enemies in half and burn them to a crisp





Raiton: Lightning Devourer Technique
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
RP Description: Using their chakra to constantly manipulate the electrons in the air around him, the user is able to form a devastating offensive aura around him to fend off any opponents hoping to attack him
Special Note: User is immune to B Rank and Below Raiton Jutsu all lightning techniques. if taijutsu on it on it will hit.




Raiton: Violent Lightning Dragon Technique
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: A
RP Description: Violent Lightning Dragon is a much more advance technique. The user performs some hand signs, before they finally create three lightning dragons smaller than just the one. Each of these dragons shoots out towards a single target and hits them violently




S Rank


Chidori Senbon
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
Chakra Cost: 20
RP Description: A ranged electric needle, with the same power as Chidori.




Raiton: One-Thousand Heavenly Spears
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
RP Description: Using this advanced Raiton technique, the user makes it rain spear-shaped lightning bolts. The effect devastating to the area and surrounding wildlife this jutsu has a range of 55 metres




Raiton: Wrath of Heaven
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu
Rank: S
RP Description: After a long chain of hand seals, the user raises their right hand to the sky. Dark clouds spin, before a large lightning bolt, Ten Foot thick will strike down and hit a single target. This causes them great damage and leaves them stunned for a short period of time


Special Jutsu Techniques
Spoiler:
Name - Eien no shīru (Seal Of The Ageless)

Type – Medical Sealing

Rank – S+

Description – Seeking a way to delay the effects of the human weakness of aging, Kaira has been studying for years to properly perfect what she has named the Eien no shīru. This seal locks the users body in a form of stasis, letting it still perform its daily functions but this is counter acted by a very slow trickle of a unique form of healing chakra which holds the body at the age and state at which the seal was placed on it. If the body holds a disease, cancer or the like when the seal is placed upon the body, the seal will lock this disease on the user until released, though at the stage it was when the seal was perfected. Should the seal eventually be removed by them self or another, the users body would suffer no true ill effects other then the person them self becoming bed ridden as the their body begins to function ‘normally’ once more.

To perform this jutsu on them self or another, the target must on a daily basis put a small amount of chakra away into the seal until the seal itself is complete, once the seal is full of chakra and properly set up the user can subconsciously maintain it outside of battle with no effect on the users chakra itself.

Inside of battle the seal can be used to help regenerate the bodies wounds slowly, and help the body ignore a very small amount of pain whilst active, though to use this form of the seal, the user must place more effort into the chakra required to maintain the seal at its proper level, though if done properly the user should not have to fill the seal with chakra once more after the battle, if the user should fall unconscious the seal itself will fall into its dormant state.

In the worst case scenario that the person with this seal should be killed, the stored chakra will begin to resurrect the body of its user once more, though this effect depends on the amount of damage the body sustains and the area in which it is sustained. If the users head is removed from its body this effect cannot possibly happen as the body has no brain in which it can communicate with.

As a sort of defence again this seal being removed, Kaira made sure this seal could only be removed by one technique. The technique she made to counteract and remove the seal itself in case she need to.

In its dormant form, the seal takes the form of a shape resembling a cross of sorts with a dark black rose at the top, when activated, the rose itself changes colour to a dark red until it is once again deactivated.

Rp / Pvp Passive Effects – Ic the user is locked at their current age and body condition, immune to disease, poison, venom and permanent negative effects until the seal is removed, wounds regenerate over time, this seal also cannot be removed by any means other than its special removal technique.
The longer this is used it can cause perminate mental damage, also makes her natual sences are lowered
like touch smeel sight and sound are affected in this mode. The damage mentaly appears after 5 posts of using and gets worse the more posts it is used for after 5 and two turns of usuage sences start to be affected.

(The seal has been placed on her chest, with the rose at the top of her cleavage)

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Name – Tokushuna shīru o jokyo (Special Seal Removal)

Type – Medical Sealing Jutsu
Rank – S+

Description – A special counter technique developed by Kaira to be the only way to remove her special seal, this is the only use of this jutsu, other than that it has no real purpose other than a failsafe.

Rp Effects – The seal is removed off the target, restoring their body to its normal state, starting it back off from the condition in which the seal was placed upon.

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.:: PAST ::.

- Not much is truely known about Kairas past other then what she has told a select few people, one of the more notable events in her live is when she was a ninja in the village hidden in the Rain. At the young age of twelve, Kaira has already perfected her own style for her clans kenjutsu techniques and when this was shown to her very jealous mother, her mother planned to have Kaira removed from the clan once and for all. When Kaira was sleeping, her mother slipped into her room and tried to kill Kaira in her sleep, but luckily Kaira had heard her mother enter and had woken just in time to stop the attack, after a brief struggle Kaira struck her mother down and quickly fled the Shi'gawa home. As she fled several Rain-nin had noticed the blood stained girl and began to chase after her, thinking they were going to take her back to the village she weaved through a tight passage only she knew about as a child and that she had filled with various traps, killing the pursuing ninja. Due to this event Kaira has been constantly wanted by the Rain Village, and she has been unable to sleep at night for no more then three to four hours at a time.

Kaira was born into a family of two brothers and three sisters. Her mother died Kumori was kind and gentle and her father was compelled by her kindness. Kaira witnessed death for the first time at age two when her youngest brother Fuishen suffered and died from a blood illness that was passed along by his father. Only one other child in Kaira's family had this illness, and that was Kaira herself.

The village doctors and Kairas father believed she herself would be dead by age three. Kaira prevailed and kept her life, although the illness still affected her abilities to move and live regularly. She often experienced pain from the illness. Her father instilled in her mind that pain led to weakness, and weakness was not acceptable. Because of this, Kaira learned at an early age to hid her pain. Tragedy struck the family once again when Kaira was four. Kumori was killed on an attack to the village, leaving Kaira and her many siblings under the care of her father, Kei. After his wife's death, Kei was relentless and harsh in caring for his children.

Two of Kaira's sisters, Miah and Sein, died first under the cruel training of Kei. This left Kaira's brother Lea and her remaining sister Lilah. Lea died after receiving a beating from Kei when Kei was angered by a moment of weakness that Kaira experienced in training. Lea's death haunted Kaira and she vowed to never let anyone be punished because of her.

Remaining in the broken family was Lilah and Kaira. They were best friends; the only friends either had ever had. Both dreamed of escaping Kei's wrath, but this dream never came fully true. Kaira had also hoped of changing her father's actions. She hoped to change him for the better.. For bother Lilah and herself. Her father was not changeable though and Lilah died in an "accident" while training. This left Kaira alone with her father and his training. His harsh behavior and raising led to Kairas cold outer personality. He is also responsible for her fear of fire and her many scars, primarily the large burn scar on her right arm. Since she received this scar, Kaira keeps her right upper arm bandaged to hide it.

When Kaira was 7, her father died. His cause of death is unknown and Kaira refuses to talk about it, although many villagers believe she finally retaliated and fought back to her father's torture. They had known all along of Kei's actions, yet none had done anything to help his children. Growing up and seeing the village's lack of care and compassion led to her development of sarcasm and lack of trust in others. After Kei's death, Kaira was put into the care of the very people she grew up disliking.

The village enrolled her in ninja academy and she began her training. All expected her to fail because of the setbacks she experienced from her illness still present in her blood. Contrary to their beliefs though Kaira excelled through her classes and learned the many aspects of her training. Her Kenjutsu studies strengthened her beliefs in kindness and caring and her harsh outer core was slightly broken down. She first trusted others for the first time in a long time when she was placed in her first squad, consisting of two boys named Gehn and Vain. These two became her closest friends throughout her studying and training.

.:: ACADEMY ::.

- Kaira was rather lazy when it came ot the academy, often not showing up at all just to simply stay at home and train with her blade or go for walks and runs where she shouldnt. This often landed her in trouble many times and kept her back from officialy passing the academy although she had already learnt the jutsu and shown the skills required to do so, when she did pass the instructors were more then over joyed to see the troublesome Shi'gawa leave.

.:: CHUNIN ::.
During her chunin exams, events took a turn for the worst. Vain, the boy Kaira had grown to love, betrayed the team and killed Gehn in an argument. Kaira, under Gehn's request, fled the scene. Eventually, Vain tracked her down and attacked. Kaira, in order to survive and to avenge her friend, fought back. Vain lost the battle and died due to his injuries. Kaira escaped virtually unharmed except for a long thin cut on the left side of her face. This cut left a scar that is a constant reminder to Kaira about the events that happened that day. She would never trust anyone easily again.


.:: JOUNIN ::.

- As she grew older Kaira found herself at the gates of Konoha, entering with the escrot of Anbu and other nin, she had met with the hokage and joined the village in a hope to correct some of the damage she has done. She now resides there permanently as a resident doctor in the hospital and also now has begun to lead her own squad.

.:: OTHER ::.
Not much is truely known about Kairas past other then what she has told a select few people, one of the more notable events in her live is when she was a ninja in the village hidden in the Rain. At the young age of twelve, Kaira has already perfected her own style for her clans kenjutsu techniques and when this was shown to her very jealous mother, her mother planned to have Kaira removed from the clan once and for all. When Kaira was sleeping, her mother slipped into her room and tried to kill Kaira in her sleep, but luckily Kaira had heard her mother enter and had woken just in time to stop the attack, after a brief struggle Kaira struck her mother down and quickly fled the Shi'gawa home.

As she fled several Rain-nin had noticed the blood stained girl and began to chase after her, thinking they were going to take her back to the village she weaved through a tight passage only she knew about as a child and that she had filled with various traps, killing the pursuing ninja. Due to this event Kaira has been constantly wanted by the Rain Village, and she has been unable to sleep at night for no more then three to four hours at a time.



RP Sample: Ino was stood in the exam room waiting for the exam to start she could see that sakura standing with Sasuke on the far side of the room she wanted to show Sasuke that she was as smart as sakura and did not want to be behind her in these exams and wanted to show she was better.

Ino saw on the other side of the room an explosion of smoke that was the size of half the war then suddenly she heard a loud scary voice began to speak about the exams he introduced himself as Ibiki Morino he was a tall man, had scars on his face and was intimating to Ino she froze where she stood and did not move as he spoke he said he was the procter of the chunin exams and he told us that we had to hand in our paperwork and that we would be given an exam seat number, he then spoke somemore about the rules for the exam it self like no combat during exams without permission from the procter and he also said the use of fatal force was not allowed Ino tried her best to listen to the man but was scared of him as he spoke.

Ino handed in her paper work and was given a deck number she looked at it and saw it was not too far from where Sakura was sitting in the room it was directly behind her 3 rows back. Ino sat in her deck ready got her pencil out ready for the exam. “Right I am ready for the exam I cant lose to Sakura I need to do my best”. Just as she finished speaking the procter spoke again and explained the rules of the exam he expained that the exam works on a points system and expained that if you reach zero points you fail the exam along with your team and cheating will result in the loss of two points from your score.


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Done

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Post by Demonfist on Sat Sep 10, 2011 4:18 pm

I'm not 100 percentage sure, but i believe the stat system is in play now, thats what was stated on Minato character app by hakai. It suppose to be placed right under the elemental info. So please go ahead and add that part. Haven't went over it throughly yet, butlooks good so far.

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Post by Demonfist on Sun Sep 11, 2011 11:05 am

Ok another thing, i dont know if this a canon clan highly doubt it though even though i personnal see nothing wrong with the clan, however ithasnt been approved or even place in the section where it need to be looked at gor approval, im sorry to say this, but until thats done and approve. I cant approve your characther.

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Post by +Kaira Rose Kami(Snookie) on Sun Sep 11, 2011 11:50 am

made the clan in correct section first you should just go throught the clan on this app

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Post by Demonfist on Sun Sep 11, 2011 2:27 pm

Ok finally got on my labtop to actually throughly look at your app over all a pretty good app. But of course being who i am and being able to finally check people apps. I'm a nit picker lol, so don't fuss me out to hard lol, but i found alot of problems{ well can't really say problems just things i didn't agree with to much} So by all means if i'm wrong somewhere in this just let me know and i will edited it accordingly unless i feel as though what you tell me still doesn't justify what you are trying to get approved. So with that being said...................... Here are my results or better yetmy findings on your app lol.










Jutsu Name – Doutjutsu Seal
Jutsu Type – Medical Sealing
Rank S
Description – The user uses their medical abilitys and knowledge to help seal the abilities of a Doujutsu away for a short period of time, Making them



This jutsu needs a post count on how long the user won't be able to use the dojutsu.



Raiton: Lightning Dragon Blast Technique
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: B
RP Description: Using this technique, the user creates a large dragon of yellow lightning energy, which they will use to cleave their enemies in half and burn them to a crisp



This is more of an A Rank Jutsu.



Chidori Senbon
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: S
Chakra Cost: 20
RP Description: A ranged electric needle, with the same power as Chidori.



Let me know if i'm wrong, but thought chidori and all its varation were banned?? if i'm incorrect then this is fine.



Chidori
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: A
RP Description: Chidori is an advanced Raiton Technique. It includes covering your hand in a thin layer of chakra, which soon expands to cover her hand in a large ball of pure electricity. This attack can be quite deadly, and is even said to be one of the strongest Raiton techniques



Same as before believe it to be banned.



Raiton: Lightning Devourer Technique
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: A
RP Description: Using their chakra to constantly manipulate the electrons in the air around him, the user is able to form a devastating offensive aura around him to fend off any opponents hoping to attack him
Special Note: User is immune to B Rank and Below Raiton Jutsu



Does this attack also stop taijutsu moves and other elemental Jutsu or just lightning??



Raiton: Lightning Tiger Missile
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: A
RP Description: This technique is also known as delayed tiger missile by its old name. It creates a tiger made out of glimmering yellow lightning that will rush across the distance to its target and pass right through it, no matter how fast it is



A little confused with this one, what does it actually do, does it attack the target?? or is it more of a genjutsu?? i ask this because it said it passes through a person and nothing else, so don't know if it is an actually attack or not.



Raiton: One-Thousand Heavenly Spears
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: S
RP Description: Using this advanced Raiton technique, the user makes it rain spear-shaped lightning bolts. The effect devastating to the area and surrounding wildlife



Even though most of your jutsu need to place some kind of range, i can over look them all but this one, whats the range of this attack seeing that it is an S rank attack i would say somewhere from around 50 to 60 meters around the general area, probably little less just guessing that really.



– Enhanced Medical Vision
Type – Surgical Alteration
Rank – S



This is more a KKG then anything else although i read how you came across to get them reguardless of it being an S rank, this gives you ablilies similar to both the hyuuga clan dojutsu and the uchiha clan dojutsu which allows you to see how the body works. Even though you can't see as good as the charka system as good as the hyuuga clan it does however rival what the uchiha clan can see. Even though you don't have the dojutsu skill of either the hyuuga or uchiha clan. This ablitlies is still to skill to be just a normal S- Rank jutsu. The fact that your eye's change for one color to another color put it in the dojutsu clan allow. I don't know maybe i'm looking to deep into it, But an admin will probably have to look at that.



Name - Eien no shīru (Seal Of The Ageless)

Type – Medical Sealing

Rank – S+



If i'm not mistaken this is simiar of f not the exact same kind of Jutsu tsunade has. This take a through amount of chakra and medical knowledge to have, I'm not sure how the stat system works or not but tsunade was a master medical ninja, if you were to place her in this current stat system her chakra control, and intelliance would be over 250 Placing her in the Leity class, i'm not saying that has to be the case with you, but aside from that you get alot of perks with this and not a real big side effect beside mental stablity, and this doesn't happen quickly this happens over time probably takes years before the effects would even start showing. This as well will prbably have to be looked at by an admin.



and looking at your strength and flaws, your strength out weigh your flaws, being a master swordsmen and a master of the medical arts, having genjutus as a weakness isn't all that great unless you can be caught in even the most basic genjutsu, which i doubt see that you are a kage. But still that will be fine, but a weakness saying that your scared of the cold, isn't really a ninja weakness so to say. Its not like if someone throws a snowball at you, your going to run an complete terror, or you won't go to an area where the climate is cold. So that's not really a weakness, so you will have to replace that with something else.

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Jutsu Name – Doutjutsu Seal
Jutsu Type – Medical Sealing
Rank S
Description – The user uses their medical abilitys and knowledge to help seal the abilities of a Doujutsu away for a short period of time, Making them



changed.



Raiton: Lightning Dragon Blast Technique
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: B
RP Description: Using this technique, the user creates a large dragon of yellow lightning energy, which they will use to cleave their enemies in half and burn them to a crisp



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Chidori Senbon
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: S
Chakra Cost: 20
RP Description: A ranged electric needle, with the same power as Chidori.



Its allowed asked cut before i started to make app.



Chidori
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: A
RP Description: Chidori is an advanced Raiton Technique. It includes covering your hand in a thin layer of chakra, which soon expands to cover her hand in a large ball of pure electricity. This attack can be quite deadly, and is even said to be one of the strongest Raiton techniques



Its allowed



Raiton: Lightning Devourer Technique
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: A
RP Description: Using their chakra to constantly manipulate the electrons in the air around him, the user is able to form a devastating offensive aura around him to fend off any opponents hoping to attack him
Special Note: User is immune to B Rank and Below Raiton Jutsu



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Raiton: Lightning Tiger Missile
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: A
RP Description: This technique is also known as delayed tiger missile by its old name. It creates a tiger made out of glimmering yellow lightning that will rush across the distance to its target and pass right through it, no matter how fast it is



I removed this tech


Raiton: One-Thousand Heavenly Spears
Jutsu Type: Ninjutsu

Rank: S
RP Description: Using this advanced Raiton technique, the user makes it rain spear-shaped lightning bolts. The effect devastating to the area and surrounding wildlife


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– Enhanced Medical Vision
Type – Surgical Alteration
Rank – S



In this most it is not meant to be used to attack people it is used for medical treatment



Name - Eien no shīru (Seal Of The Ageless)

Type – Medical Sealing

Rank – S+



added another side affect



and added another flaw

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Post by Demonfist on Sun Sep 11, 2011 6:28 pm

On my phone so can do what i want to... Anyway everything else seems fine but still the flaws you added im sure u keep this seal activate for a long period of time ic if not all the time given me an estimated time when the flaws will take effecr and give me a flaw once it feactivated and it will be good to go

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Post by +Kaira Rose Kami(Snookie) on Sun Sep 11, 2011 6:36 pm

updated

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Post by Demonfist on Sun Sep 11, 2011 6:39 pm

Ok.... Ok.... everything else is fine so unless ad admin said different This app is......





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changed and updated

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Post by Demonfist on Tue Sep 13, 2011 10:32 am

Hmm... I see you have made that technique into a dojutsu huh.... Lol figure you would, its already been approved so i see no problems with it....



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